Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and sentence structure, be more concise and natural, and add a clear topic sentence then two specific supporting details. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" correctly and avoid repetition. Focus on correct verb forms (e.g., "became" → "became" used correctly with past context or "have become") and articles/plural forms ("a lot of landscape" → "a lot of landscapes").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I became keen on photography after I moved to Australia because the landscapes here are stunning and very varied. For example, I love photographing national parks for their dramatic scenery and beaches for their light and colours, so I often go out early to capture sunrise shots.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Correct collocations ("rural areas", "open spaces", "crowded") and grammar ("urban areas, however, usually have a lot of people") will make your answer more natural. Keep it to 2–4 sentences and avoid awkward phrases like "urban area hardware".

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer quiet, open spaces and fewer people, which makes it easier to frame shots. However, urban areas can be interesting for architectural photography and street scenes, so I sometimes visit cities when I want more dynamic subjects.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, direct answer first (e.g., "I like both") and then explain with specific, coherent reasons. Correct vocabulary and grammar ("beautiful places such as mountains", "Australia has fantastic beaches") and remove unclear sentences ("I want to take the hotel" is confusing). Use linking words like "because" and "for example". Aim for 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I like views in both my own country and other countries. For example, my home country has beautiful mountains and forests that are great for landscape photos, while Australia has fantastic beaches with great light for seascapes, so I enjoy photographing both.

× Yes I do. I'm became keen on taking the photo after came to Australia because Australia have a lot of the landscape.

✓ Yes, I do. I became keen on taking photos after I came to Australia because Australia has a lot of beautiful landscapes.

Multiple present/past tense and related issues: 'I'm became' mixes present continuous and past simple; use 'I became'. 'after came to Australia' is missing subject and past tense auxiliary; use 'after I came to Australia'. 'Australia have' disagrees in number with singular subject; use 'Australia has'. 'the landscape' is unnatural—use plural 'landscapes' and add adjective 'beautiful' for clarity. Also use 'photos' plural. Suggestion: keep past simple for completed past events and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word forms.

× It was stunning. So that's the reason I'm really enjoy the taking the photo.

✓ It was stunning. So that's the reason I really enjoy taking photos.

Tense and verb form errors: 'I'm really enjoy' incorrectly combines present continuous with base verb; use simple present 'I really enjoy'. 'the taking the photo' has unnecessary articles and wrong noun form; use 'taking photos'. Suggestion: use simple present to express general likes and correct gerund form 'taking' followed directly by plural noun 'photos'.

× A lot of the National Park and the beaches, especially beaches is so nice.

✓ There are a lot of national parks and beaches, especially the beaches, which are very nice.

Article and number errors: 'A lot of the National Park' incorrectly uses singular with 'a lot of' and unnecessary definite article; use plural 'national parks'. Also 'beaches is' has subject-verb disagreement; use 'beaches are'. Added 'There are' to introduce existence. Suggestion: use plural nouns after 'a lot of' and match verb number.

× I prefer view in the rural area because they offer the quiet and open the area and also it is not too crowded so we can take the photo quite easily.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they offer quiet, open spaces and they are not too crowded, so we can take photos quite easily.

Quantifier and article errors: 'I prefer view' needs plural 'views'. 'the rural area' should be general 'rural areas'. 'the quiet and open the area' is ungrammatical—use 'quiet, open spaces'. Also inconsistent pluralization and pronoun reference fixed: 'they offer' refers to 'rural areas'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking generally and remove unnecessary definite articles.

× But urban area hardware usually a lot of the people and it's difficult to take the photo over there.

✓ But urban areas usually have a lot of people, and it's difficult to take photos there.

Wrong word choice and structure: 'urban area hardware' is incorrect—likely misuse of 'have' typed as 'hardware'. Use 'urban areas usually have'. 'a lot of the people' should be 'a lot of people'. 'take the photo over there' is wordy; use 'take photos there'. Suggestion: choose correct verb 'have' for possession and simplify phrases.

× Actually I prefer both of them because my own country has a lot of the beautiful space such as a mountain, but in Australia is fashioning the beaches so I really enjoyed everywhere.

✓ Actually I prefer both because my own country has a lot of beautiful places such as mountains, and Australia has fashionable beaches, so I really enjoy everywhere.

Plural and article errors: 'both of them' can be 'both' in this context. 'a lot of the beautiful space' is incorrect—use 'a lot of beautiful places'. 'such as a mountain' should be plural 'mountains' when speaking generally. 'in Australia is fashioning the beaches' is ungrammatical; use 'Australia has fashionable beaches'. Tense mismatch: 'I really enjoyed everywhere' should be present 'I really enjoy everywhere' for general preference. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general references and correct verb forms.

× I want to take the hotel.

✓ I want to stay at a hotel.

Incorrect verb and preposition use: 'take the hotel' is unnatural in English. The correct expression for using hotel accommodation is 'stay at a hotel'. Also use indefinite article 'a' when referring to any hotel. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs for common collocations (stay at a hotel).