Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix vocabulary errors (e.g., "visit scenic areas", "different angles", "photos") and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit scenic areas like mountains or lakes, I take shots from different angles and share the best photos with my friends because I find composing images really enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer first (urban or rural) and explain briefly with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct grammar and tense (e.g., "I feel" or "I feel relaxed when I go there"). Remove fillers like "uh" and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I live in a crowded city and enjoy the calm of nature. For example, being in woods or near lakes makes me feel relaxed and helps me forget the busy city life.

Sugerencia: Give a clear position or say "it depends" and explain with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases ("not a lot"). Use linking words (e.g., "however", "for example") and provide one concrete comparison. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends — I appreciate views in my own country for their familiarity and culture, but I also enjoy landscapes abroad because they offer different scenery. For example, mountains at home feel familiar, however coastal landscapes in another country can be surprisingly different and exciting.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The use of 'do' for emphasis is not ungrammatical, but in this context it is unnecessary and sounds unnatural. Removing 'do' produces a more natural simple present sentence. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual preferences ('I like...').

× For example when I go to sign on scenic views area like the mountain or the lakes and I will just take a different angles of the fuse and just share the photos with my friends and I.

✓ For example, when I go to scenic areas such as mountains or lakes, I take different angles of the views and share the photos with my friends.

Multiple structural problems: 'go to sign on scenic views area' is ungrammatical, 'the mountain or the lakes' should be plural/uncountable 'mountains or lakes', 'I will just take a different angles' mixes future with wrong article and plural, 'of the fuse' is incorrect word choice likely 'views', and 'with my friends and I' should be 'my friends'. Correct by using simple present for habitual actions and proper noun forms. Suggestion: break into clauses, use 'scenic areas', plural nouns, correct object pronoun 'me' rarely needed—here use 'my friends'.

× I think it's interesting.

✓ I think it's interesting.

This sentence is grammatical; no correction needed. It correctly uses 'it' as an impersonal subject. Included for completeness; no change required.

× Since I'm living in a city and the city is very crowded so I prefer it to the rural areas and I like the natural things like the woods and the lakes I just mentioned.

✓ Since I live in a city and it is very crowded, I prefer rural areas; I like natural places such as the woods and lakes I mentioned.

Use simple present 'I live' rather than continuous 'I'm living' for a general state. 'Prefer it to the rural areas' incorrectly uses 'it' and articles; say 'prefer rural areas'. Sentence run-on: split with punctuation or conjunctions. Suggestion: use simple present for general facts and proper article usage ('woods and lakes').

× And I really, uh, felt very uh, relaxed when I been there.

✓ And I really felt very relaxed when I was there.

'Been' is the past participle and cannot function alone as the past tense; the correct past simple form here is 'was' or use present perfect 'have been'. The sentence uses past time marker 'when', so use past simple: 'was there'. Suggestion: use 'was' or 'have been' depending on intended meaning.

× I think it's 5050 because I I do like my my country's views, but also some views in other countries are not a lot.

✓ I think it's 50/50 because I like my country's views, but some views in other countries are different.

'5050' should be written '50/50'. Repetition 'I I do like my my' should be cleaned to 'I like'. 'Some views in other countries are not a lot' is incorrect—likely meant 'are not the same' or 'are different'; 'a lot' is inappropriate. Use 'different' to contrast. Suggestion: remove fillers and repetitions, use clear adjectives like 'different'.

× They are not the same in my country.

✓ They are not the same as those in my country.

Comparison requires a clear object: 'not the same as those in my country' or 'not the same as the views in my country.' 'In my country' alone is ambiguous. Suggestion: use 'as' plus plural pronoun 'those' or repeat the noun being compared.

× So I can really tell you which way I like.

✓ So I cannot really tell you which I prefer.

Meaning is unclear: original seems to mean 'I can't really say which I prefer.' Use negative 'cannot' and 'which I prefer' for clarity. 'Which way I like' is unnatural. Suggestion: use 'which I prefer' or 'which one I like better'.