Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, you know), correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms), and add one or two specific details with linking words. Keep the answer to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I am especially drawn to mountain landscapes because of their dramatic shapes and changing light. For example, last year I photographed a sunrise over the hills, which produced vivid colours and deep shadows.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence and correct tense/grammar. Give one specific reason with a linking word (because/so), and optionally add a short example. Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban areas because they offer a wide variety of subjects, such as architecture, street scenes and markets. For example, in the city I can photograph colourful markets and modern buildings all in one walk.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer (own country or other countries). Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and provide one specific example with a clear link. Keep it polite and logical.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful coastal spots. For example, my hometown has Hoyu Beach, which is famous for its golden sand and clear water, so I often photograph sunsets there.

× As I do like taking picture of different views and, uh, you know, I'm passionate about taking pictures and, uh, for example, uh, beautiful scenario like mountain views.

✓ As I do, I like taking pictures of different views, and I'm passionate about photography; for example, beautiful scenes such as mountain views.

The errors include missing plural form 'pictures' (use of countable noun) and incorrect noun choice 'scenario' for a scene. The phrase 'taking picture of' should be 'taking pictures of' (noun plural) and 'beautiful scenario like' should be 'beautiful scenes such as'. Also punctuation and conjunctions were clarified. Suggestion: use plural for countable nouns and choose 'scene' or 'views' for landscapes, and use 'such as' or 'like' appropriately.

× Also, I really like to take pictures and most of the prob probabilities, uh, most of the times I used to take.

✓ Also, I really like to take pictures, and most of the time I take them.

The phrase 'most of the prob probabilities, uh, most of the times' is incorrect and redundant. 'Most of the time' is the correct adverbial phrase. 'I used to take' suggests a past habitual action; since the speaker means a current habit, use simple present 'I take them'. Suggestion: use 'most of the time' and simple present for current habits.

× I do prefer urban areas because it had a lot of places to cover many pictures and urban areas mostly safe for taking pictures.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they have many places to take pictures, and urban areas are generally safer for photography.

Subject-verb agreement and tense problems: 'I do prefer' is acceptable but unnecessary; 'it had' is past tense incorrectly used for 'areas' (plural), so use 'they have'. Also 'to cover many pictures' is incorrect collocation; use 'to take many pictures'. Finally, add 'are' to say 'urban areas are mostly safe'. Suggestion: use simple present for preferences and correct plural agreement ('areas' with 'they').

× So I'm really prefer urban areas.

✓ So I really prefer urban areas.

The auxiliary 'am' plus base verb 'prefer' is incorrect; use either 'I really prefer' (simple present) or 'I'm really into urban areas' (present continuous with -ing). Suggestion: use 'I prefer' for general preferences.

× What's the nonsense for Sinner?

✓ What nonsense is this?

This sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The speaker likely intended to express confusion. 'What's the nonsense for Sinner?' has incorrect word order and unclear nouns. 'What nonsense is this?' is a clear, grammatical alternative. Suggestion: use standard question word order 'What + noun + auxiliary + subject'.

× My country have lots of places to uh, take me photos.

✓ My country has lots of places to take photos.

'Country' is singular and requires 'has', not 'have'. 'Take me photos' is incorrect word order and pronoun use; say 'take photos' or 'take photos of me' if referring to photos of the speaker. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct object placement.

× For example, my hometown also have lots of beaches, uh, Hoyu Beach also very familiar and famous for us.

✓ For example, my hometown also has many beaches; Hoyu Beach is very well known and famous to us.

Subject-verb agreement: 'hometown' (singular) takes 'has', not 'have'. 'Also very familiar and famous for us' is ungrammatical; use 'is very well known' or 'is familiar to us'. Suggestion: use 'is' + adjective and 'well known' for fame.

× And you want to take a picture then come our country and then make it small.

✓ If you want to take pictures, come to our country and visit; you'll see many great photo spots.

The original sentence has incorrect conditional structure and unclear phrase 'make it small'. Use a conditional 'If you want...' and clearer imperative 'come to our country'. 'Make it small' is meaningless here, so replace with a relevant suggestion. Suggestion: use proper conditional forms and clear verbs.