Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrasing and grammatical errors (e.g. use 'people' not 'people's', and clarify what 'items' means). Keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I like photographing landscapes and everyday scenes because they capture different moods and tell stories about people’s lives. For example, a city street at sunset can feel busy and warm, while a quiet park can look peaceful.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then explain with specific reasons and accurate vocabulary. Correct factual or word-choice errors (e.g. 'full of scientists' likely incorrect—use 'skyscrapers, shops, and lights' or 'architectural variety'). Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' and limit to 2–3 short sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I live in a city and I enjoy its variety of buildings and street life. For example, the mixture of modern architecture, busy markets, and colorful signs makes urban scenes more visually interesting to photograph.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give clear, specific reasons using correct grammar. Use linking words (e.g. 'because', 'so') and concise examples. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'I was not really understand'—say 'I don't know them well.' Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I have lived there for many years and I know the best places to visit. For instance, I know which coastal towns have great sunsets and which parks look beautiful in spring, so I can plan better photos.

× Yeah, I like taking pictures of different views because I think the different views are such as items, people's, those can merge different emotions.

✓ Yeah, I like taking pictures of different views because I think different views, such as objects and people, can convey different emotions.

The original sentence misuses possessive and demonstrative forms ('people's, those') and has awkward phrasing. Replace 'people's, those' with 'people' and use 'such as objects and people' to introduce examples. Also change 'merge different emotions' to 'convey different emotions' because 'convey' correctly describes expressing emotions through images. Suggestion: Use clear noun phrases after 'such as' and choose verbs that match the intended meaning (e.g., convey, evoke).

× Both of these I like but I prefer urban areas because I live in the urban not rural and and the views in the urban I think is is full of scientists and it's more attractive for me.

✓ I like both, but I prefer urban areas because I live in the city, not the countryside, and I think the views in the city are full of interest and are more attractive to me.

Multiple issues: word order and article misuse ('the urban not rural') and subject-verb agreement ('the views... is is'). 'Views' is plural, so use 'are'. Also 'the urban' and 'rural' are incorrect nouns here; use 'the city' and 'the countryside' or 'urban areas'/'rural areas'. 'Full of scientists' was likely incorrect meaning; replaced with 'full of interest'. Suggestion: Keep subject and verb number consistent (plural subjects take plural verbs) and use common nouns for places ('city','countryside').

× I prefer views in my own country because I live in there for many years.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I have lived there for many years.

The phrase 'live in there' is incorrect; use 'live there' without 'in'. Also the time expression 'for many years' implies an action that started in the past and continues, so present perfect 'have lived' is appropriate instead of simple present. Suggestion: Use 'have/has + past participle' for actions continuing to the present and omit unnecessary prepositions (no 'in' before 'there').

× I the area is more familiar for me and I know where it's more attractive for me and the other countries I was not really understand.

✓ The area is more familiar to me, so I know which places are more attractive to me, and I don't really understand other countries well.

Original has misplaced subject 'I the area' and incorrect preposition 'familiar for me' (use 'familiar to me'). 'I know where it's more attractive for me' is unclear; replace with 'I know which places are more attractive to me.' 'I was not really understand' mixes past tense and base verb; correct to 'I don't really understand' or 'I don't know other countries well.' Suggestion: Use correct word order (subject before verb), 'familiar to' instead of 'familiar for', and match verb form to tense and subject ('do/does' for present negative, followed by base verb).