Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 自然さと文法の正確さを高める必要があります。まず、口語の「Hmm」や不要な「uh」を減らし、動詞の時制や形（例えば “pick” → “take”, “I usually taking” → “I usually take”）を正しく使ってください。また、例を出す際は場所名や状況を具体的にし、一文で主旨を述べた後に短い補足を加えると効果的です。練習方法としては、①簡潔なトピック文（1文）を作る、②具体例を1つ加え、③接続詞（for example, when）でつなぐ練習を繰り返してください。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I visited the coast last summer, I often took pictures of the sea and nearby mountains because the contrast between them looked beautiful in different lights.

Sugerencia: 意味は伝わりますが、表現が不自然で文法ミスが多いです。まず主語と述語を明確にして（"I prefer rural areas"）、その理由を一つの文で述べ、接続詞（because, since, as）で補足をつなぎます。具体例や感情（relaxed, peaceful）を加えると説得力が増します。練習方法：①理由を3つ考え、簡潔な英語で1つだけ使う②becauseを使って理由文をつなぐ③自然を表す語彙（peaceful, less crowded, scenery）を覚えて使ってください。

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are more peaceful and less crowded than cities. For example, I enjoy walking on quiet country trails and taking photos of open fields and forests.

Sugerencia: 比較表現や語彙の選択を改善する必要があります。まず「I like views in other countries」など明確な主張を置き、比較では "compared to" を正しく使い、形容詞（big → large, dynamic）や名詞（scenery）を適切に配置してください。余分な "uh" を減らし、一つの比較に絞って具体例（which place, what you noticed）を述べると良いです。練習方法：①“Compared to A, B is …” の構文を使う②具体的な特徴（scale, variety, colors）を1-2語で練習③不要語を消して短く言う練習をしてください。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because the landscapes can be more dramatic. For example, in the United States I noticed much larger mountains and wider coastlines than in Japan, which creates more dynamic scenery.

× I like pick, I like taking pictures of different views.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views.

The student mixed base form and -ing form after 'like'. After 'like' both 'to + verb' and 'verb+ing' are possible but must be consistent; 'I like to take' is more natural here. Use 'to take' or 'taking' rather than 'pick'. Also 'pick' is the wrong verb choice for photographing; use 'take'. Suggestion: Use 'I like to take pictures of different views.' or 'I like taking pictures of different views.'

× Uh, for example when I visited upload, uh, I usually taking picture of sea and mountain.

✓ For example, when I visit a place, I usually take pictures of the sea and the mountains.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'visited' conflicts with habitual adverb 'usually'; 'usually' requires present simple ('visit') for general habits. 'I usually taking' is ungrammatical; use base form 'take' after 'usually'. Also missing articles: 'a place', 'the sea', 'the mountains'. 'Mountain' should be plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I usually take pictures of the sea and the mountains.'

× I prefer to view a rural area because compared to urban area L'Oreal earlier are split natural environment, so I feel.

✓ I prefer rural areas because, compared to urban areas, they have a more natural environment, so I feel more relaxed.

Multiple issues simplified to adjective/adverb and sentence structure: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match preference in general. 'Compared to urban area' needs plural and commas. 'L'Oreal earlier are split' appears to be mis-said; corrected to 'they have a more natural environment'. 'so I feel' is incomplete; add result 'more relaxed'. Suggestion: Make subject and comparison consistent and complete the result clause: 'I prefer rural areas because, compared to urban areas, they have a more natural environment, so I feel more relaxed.'

× I like builds other countries, for example, in America compared to Japan, uh, Americans mountain and sea are very big and uh, it's dynamic, uh, scenery.

✓ I like visiting other countries. For example, in America compared to Japan, the mountains and seas are much larger, and the scenery is more dramatic.

Original has incorrect verb 'builds' (should be 'visiting'), wrong preposition usage and missing articles: 'in America compared to Japan' needs clarity; use 'in America, compared to Japan,'. 'Americans mountain and sea' should be 'the mountains and seas' (articles and plural). 'it's dynamic, scenery' is ungrammatical; correct to 'the scenery is more dramatic.' Suggestion: Use 'visit' or 'visiting' for going to countries, plural nouns with 'the' for natural features, and clear comparative phrasing: 'the scenery is more dramatic.'