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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Candidato

Laws are loved. I loved it very much. I loved taking pictures on an everywhere and nature and cafe and umm like different places. Something like this I love is to do photos. I like Milk Institute photos.

Examinador

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Candidato

Look for a box on Auburn and rural areas are. When I'm in the city I prefer to use an urban areas and when in the village I prefer to railroad areas.

Examinador

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Candidato

I prefer bots and in my country and in other country when I travel, I prefer to visit other countries because I see the new places that I've never seen before. But in my country it has so much places that I like.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.5Fluidez y coherencia: 5.5Pronunciación: 5.5Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.5

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Puntuación: 48.0

Sugerencia: Старайтесь говорить ясно и по теме: начните с чётного утверждения («Да» или «Нет»), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных детали и пример. Избегайте бессвязных фраз и повторов. Работайте над грамматикой (времена и предлоги) и произношением неопределённых слов («umm»). Можно использовать связки: «for example», «such as», «especially».

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing nature and cafes, because they often have interesting light and colours. For example, last weekend I took several photos of a riverside café that had colourful umbrellas and reflections in the water.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Puntuación: 36.0

Sugerencia: Отвечайте прямо и однозначно: выберите одно предпочтение или объясните, что вы предпочитаете в разных ситуациях. Используйте простые связки: «when», «because», «but». Избегайте несвязных словосочетаний и неверных конструкций. Попрактикуйтесь строить короткие грамматически правильные предложения: субъект — сказуемое — дополнение.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views when I am in the city because I like the architecture and busy streets. However, when I am in the countryside I enjoy rural scenes like fields and old houses, since they are peaceful and photogenic.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Puntuación: 52.0

Sugerencia: Давайте чёткий ответ с кратким объяснением: «I prefer… because…» и приведите пример. Избегайте непонятных слов («bots») и смешения времён. Используйте слова сравнения: «however», «also», «for example». Подчёркивайте причины и личный опыт.

Ejemplo: I prefer visiting other countries because I enjoy discovering new places and cultures. For example, when I travelled to Spain I liked the different architecture and food, but I also appreciate many beautiful places in my own country.

Gramática

Sentence structure errors

× Laws are loved.

I love taking photos.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical; 'Laws are loved' does not relate to taking pictures. This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Use a clear subject 'I' and verb phrase 'love taking photos' to convey the intended meaning.

Past tense issue

× I loved it very much.

I love it very much.

The question is general (Do you like ...?), so the present simple should be used rather than past tense. Use 'love' for habitual or general preference.

Sentence structure errors

× I loved taking pictures on an everywhere and nature and cafe and umm like different places.

I love taking pictures everywhere: of nature, cafes, and different places.

The original has incorrect word order and articles ('on an everywhere') and lists are not parallel. Use 'everywhere' without an article and parallel nouns 'nature, cafes, and different places' for clarity.

Sentence structure errors

× Something like this I love is to do photos.

I love doing things like that and taking photos.

The original word order is awkward and ungrammatical. Use the gerund 'doing' and 'taking photos' in natural order: 'I love doing things like that and taking photos.'

Incorrect use of articles

× I like Milk Institute photos.

I like photos of the Milk Institute.

The noun phrase needs a preposition to show possession or relation: 'photos of the Milk Institute.' Also place the name before 'photos' or use 'photos of' to be natural.

Sentence structure errors

× Look for a box on Auburn and rural areas are.

I prefer both urban and rural areas.

The original is nonsensical. It seems to attempt to contrast urban and rural areas. Use a clear concise sentence: 'I prefer both urban and rural areas.'

Article errors

× When I'm in the city I prefer to use an urban areas and when in the village I prefer to railroad areas.

When I'm in the city, I prefer urban areas, and when I'm in the village, I prefer rural areas.

Incorrect article use ('an urban areas') and wrong word 'railroad areas'. Use 'urban areas' and 'rural areas' and include 'I'm' for the second clause. Maintain parallel structure.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer bots and in my country and in other country when I travel, I prefer to visit other countries because I see the new places that I've never seen before.

I prefer both in my country and in other countries. When I travel, I prefer to visit other countries because I can see new places I have never seen before.

Several issues: 'bots' should be 'both'; 'other country' needs plural 'other countries'; tense and modal clarity: use 'can see' or simple 'see' and use present perfect 'have never seen' correctly. Split into two sentences for clarity.

Present tense issue

× But in my country it has so much places that I like.

But my country has many places that I like.

Use 'has' with subject 'my country' (not 'it has' unnecessarily). 'So much places' is incorrect; use 'many places' for countable plural nouns. Keep sentence concise.

Vocabulario

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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