Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and repetition, make the answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, follow with two specific examples (locations and times), and avoid filler words (uh, um, you know). Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, additionally).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often capture sunsets at the beach and from my apartment balcony, and I sometimes take cityscape shots in the evening. Additionally, I like experimenting with different angles to capture the light.

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repeating words. Give one clear reason and a supporting detail or brief example. Use linking words such as because and therefore to show cause and effect.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because tall buildings in cities often block wide views. As a result, I can see more open landscapes and enjoy unobstructed sunsets in the countryside.

Sugerencia: Avoid vague phrases and repetitions; give one clear preference and support it with specific details. Mention particular landscapes or examples of places and explain briefly why they are special.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes, such as coastal cliffs and rolling countryside. For instance, the coastal cliffs offer dramatic sunsets, while the countryside provides peaceful sunrise views, which I find very relaxing.

× Yes, I, I like taking pictures of different views, especially, uh, taking the sunset photos like various locations from the various locations, uh, such as from the beach or sometimes from my apartment or sometimes even even in the cities, you know, and other than that.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially sunset photos taken from various locations, such as the beach, my apartment, or cities.

The original sentence has repetition, filler words, and awkward structure. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Remove unnecessary fillers and repeated phrases, combine related ideas concisely, and use a clear noun phrase 'sunset photos taken from various locations.' Suggestion: plan the sentence before speaking, avoid repeating words, and use parallel lists for locations. ID:26

× Umm, I would say the rural areas because recently urban areas build a lot of higher, uh, buildings.

✓ Umm, I would say rural areas because recently urban areas have built a lot of tall buildings.

The phrase 'build a lot of higher buildings' is ungrammatical and uses incorrect adjective form and verb tense. This fits 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (ID 13) and also touches on past action; the correction uses 'tall' (correct adjective) and present perfect 'have built' to indicate recent changes. Suggestion: use appropriate adjective forms (tall, higher needs a comparison target) and correct verb forms for recent events. ID:13

× So that means they kind of sometimes block their really, uh, So sometimes, sometimes, sometimes kind of block the view.

✓ So they sometimes block the view.

Original has repetition and unclear pronoun 'their' and filler words; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use a concise subject and verb without fillers. Suggestion: eliminate redundant words and ensure pronouns clearly refer to a noun. ID:26

× So I would say I would prefer, uh, the rural area because I can see everything from there.

✓ So I would say I prefer rural areas because I can see everything there.

Using 'the rural area' is awkward and mismatches general preference; this is a singular/plural issue (ID 1). Use plural 'rural areas' or 'the countryside' for general statements. Also simplify verb phrase 'I would say I would prefer' to 'I prefer' for clarity. Suggestion: choose plural or uncountable nouns for general preferences. ID:1

× Maybe umm I would say in my own country because my country has L really beautiful landscapes, countryside and the views can be beautiful, amazingly beautiful.

✓ Maybe I would say in my own country because it has really beautiful landscapes and countryside, and the views can be amazing.

The sentence contains filler 'L', repetition, and awkward phrasing; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Replace repeated adjectives with a single strong adjective 'amazing', and avoid repeating 'my country' twice by using 'it.' Suggestion: speak more deliberately and use pronouns to avoid repetition. ID:26

× So umm there there are sunsets you can look at or maybe sunrise from the landscapes you can.

✓ There are sunsets and sunrises you can enjoy from those landscapes.

Original has repetition and incorrect word order at the end; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use parallel nouns 'sunsets and sunrises' and a clear verb 'enjoy' and correct object placement. Suggestion: form parallel structures and place verbs before objects for clarity. ID:26