Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., “share them with my friends”), avoid redundancy, and limit to about 3–4 sentences. Add one specific detail and a linking phrase to make it coherent (e.g., explain what types of landscapes or a memorable photo).

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. I usually photograph landscapes like mountain sunsets or local wildlife when I travel, because they help me remember the place. For example, last year I took a panoramic photo of a canyon at dawn and later shared it with my friends to show how dramatic the light was.

Sugerencia: Clarify your preference and fix vocabulary and grammar errors. Use one clear topic sentence (“I prefer rural areas”), then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (because / so). Replace unclear phrases (e.g., “roller air base”) and provide concise supporting details. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and have cleaner air. For example, the many trees and open fields help me relax and think clearly, unlike the polluted streets and noise of the city.

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical and precise. Begin with a concise topic sentence stating your preference, then give a specific reason and an example. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect grammar (e.g., “People say that Switzerland is like paradise”). Limit response to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: I like views in both my country and abroad, but if I had to choose I would prefer other countries because they offer very different landscapes. For example, Switzerland is often described as a paradise because of its green valleys, cows grazing on alpine pastures, and spectacular mountain scenery.

× I like to capture memories and share with them my friends.

✓ I like to capture memories and share them with my friends.

The pronoun order is incorrect. 'Share them with my friends' places the object pronoun 'them' directly after the verb and the prepositional phrase 'with my friends' after it, which is the correct natural order in English. Also 'my friends' should follow 'with'. Suggestion: place object pronouns immediately after the verb when using 'with' phrases (e.g., 'share them with...').

× For example, when I travel I take pictures of landscapes or animals maybe so I can look back at the moment later.

✓ For example, when I travel I take pictures of landscapes or animals so I can look back at the moments later.

The insertion of 'maybe' is misplaced and creates awkward flow. Also 'moment' should be plural 'moments' because 'pictures' and past experiences are typically referred to in plural. The error type requested to be corrected is verb + -ing: 'travel' as a verb is fine here; however to follow the list, focus on correcting misplaced adverb and noun number. Suggestion: remove 'maybe' or place it properly ('maybe I take pictures of animals') and use plural 'moments' when referring generally to multiple memories.

× And I compose a few snapshots on social media to get family updated.

✓ And I post a few snapshots on social media to keep my family updated.

'Compose' is not the usual verb for uploading photos; 'post' is more natural. Also 'to get family updated' is ungrammatical: use 'to keep my family updated' or 'to get my family updated'. This is a present tense usage and collocation issue. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('post on social media', 'keep someone updated') and include possessive 'my' before 'family'.

× Actually I prefer roller air base as I am living now in urban area but I don't like there is a lot of big issue with pollution.

✓ Actually I prefer rural areas because I am living in an urban area now, and I don't like that there are big problems with pollution.

Several errors: 'roller air base' seems to be a mistaken phrase for 'rural areas' (word choice). 'Living now in urban area' needs article 'an' and different word order: 'living in an urban area now'. 'I don't like there is a lot of big issue with pollution' has multiple issues: missing 'that', incorrect verb number and noun form; use 'there are' with plural 'big problems' or 'a big problem'. This falls under incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and also article/number issues. Suggestion: correct vocabulary ('rural areas'), use proper articles, and match 'there are' with plural nouns.

× So in rural areas there is a lot of trees that have city relax and think about future and also it's good for your brain.

✓ So in rural areas there are a lot of trees, which help you relax and think about the future, and it's also good for your brain.

Use 'there are' with plural 'trees'. 'that have city relax' is ungrammatical—should be 'which help you relax' or 'that help people relax'. 'Think about future' needs the article 'the' before 'future'. This is mainly an incorrect use of prepositions and relative clauses and number agreement. Suggestion: use 'there are' for plural, use 'help someone relax', and include 'the' with 'future' when speaking generally about an individual's future.

× I prefer both of them actually, but if I have to pick one, I'm definitely going to another country.

✓ I prefer both actually, but if I had to pick one, I'd definitely choose another country.

The original mixes present preference with an incorrect future/modal construction. 'If I have to pick one' is acceptable in spoken English, but 'I'm definitely going to another country' implies a plan rather than a preference; better is the conditional 'If I had to pick one, I'd definitely choose another country.' This is a present tense and modal use issue. Suggestion: use conditional form for hypothetical choices ('If I had to... I would...') and use 'choose' rather than 'go to' when expressing preference.

× People says that this is one of paradise country and there's a lot of trees, cows, landscapes.

✓ People say that this is one of the most paradisiacal countries; there are a lot of trees, cows, and beautiful landscapes.

'People says' should be 'people say' (subject-verb agreement). 'One of paradise country' is incorrect: use 'one of the most paradisiacal countries' or 'one of the most beautiful countries'—the noun must be plural after 'one of'. 'There's a lot of trees' should be 'there are a lot of trees' (plural agreement). Also list items should be separated with commas and adjectives ('beautiful landscapes') added for naturalness. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs, use correct 'one of the' + plural noun structure, and use 'there are' with plural nouns.