Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn, sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Cụ thể: tránh lỗi danh từ/đại từ (pupil → I / student), chia động từ (am enthusiastic), danh từ đếm/không đếm (photo of things), và làm câu ngắn gọn trong tối đa 3–4 câu. Thêm một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó một hoặc hai câu chi tiết cụ thể về lý do và ví dụ. Ví dụ: nói rõ bạn chụp loại ảnh gì, khi nào và mục đích lưu giữ khoảnh khắc.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of the things around me. I often capture everyday moments—like my friends laughing or sunsets—because I want to remember them. For example, I recently took photos of my family gathering to keep those memories.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng (I prefer rural areas), sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp và loại bỏ những từ thừa hoặc lẫn lộn. Giải thích cụ thể lý do bằng 1–2 câu kèm ví dụ: mô tả đặc điểm nông thôn bạn thích (không khí trong lành, phong cảnh). Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý (because, so, for example).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because I find the scenery more peaceful and natural. For example, the countryside has open fields and fresh air, which makes it easier for me to take beautiful landscape photos.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh từ ngữ mơ hồ hoặc sai nghĩa (burden, champions). Nói trực tiếp I prefer views in other countries, rồi nêu lý do cụ thể (variety, architecture, different culture) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về một nơi bạn đã từng thấy đẹp. Sử dụng thì và ngữ pháp chính xác, tránh những cụm từ không rõ nghĩa.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different architecture and landscapes that I don't see at home. For example, when I visited the coastal town of Hoi An, I loved the colorful buildings and riverside scenes, which were very inspiring for my photography.

× I would say I am a pupil who enthusiastic with taking photo of thing around me and I also want to capture every moment of my life in many angles so that I can stop.

✓ I would say I am a pupil who is enthusiastic about taking photos of things around me, and I also want to capture every moment of my life from many angles so that I can keep them.

The sentence omits the verb 'is' after the relative clause 'who', and uses the adjective 'enthusiastic' without the correct preposition 'about'. 'Photo' and 'thing' need plural forms 'photos' and 'things' (singular/plural issue). 'In many angles' is incorrect preposition; use 'from many angles'. 'So that I can stop' is unclear; likely intended 'keep them' or 'preserve them'. Suggested improvement: include the linking verb, use 'enthusiastic about', make nouns plural where appropriate, and choose the correct preposition 'from' when describing perspectives.

× Shannon's Liam Rural areas will be more favourable as a people living in urban areas, I'm guess due to the urban scenes, so it's quite hard for me to find a beautiful place in the urban.

✓ Rural areas will be more favourable for people living in urban areas, I guess, because of the urban scenery, so it's quite hard for me to find a beautiful place in the city.

The original sentence includes confusing proper nouns 'Shannon's Liam' and the phrase 'as a people' which incorrectly uses 'a' with the plural 'people'. 'I'm guess' is wrong form; use 'I guess'. 'Due to the urban scenes' should be 'because of the urban scenery' or 'due to urban scenery'. 'In the urban' is ungrammatical; use 'in the city'. Suggested improvement: remove unrelated names, use 'people' without 'a', use correct verb form 'I guess', and prefer 'city' or 'urban areas' for clarity.

× I prefer umm the view in other countries because in my countries the burden occurs repeatedly in every part of my nations.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because in my country burdens occur repeatedly in many parts of the nation.

Use singular 'country' when referring to your own nation in general; 'countries' was incorrect here. 'The view' should be plural 'the views' to match general preference. 'The burden occurs repeatedly in every part of my nations' mixes singular and plural and uses awkward wording; better: 'burdens occur repeatedly in many parts of the nation' or 'problems occur repeatedly throughout my country'. Suggested improvement: choose consistent singular/plural nouns and use clear nouns like 'burdens' or 'problems' and 'parts of the country'.

× I used to travel to champions and is were very beautiful.

✓ I used to travel to the countryside and it was very beautiful.

The phrase 'travel to champions' appears to be a mispronunciation or wrong word; likely intended 'countryside' or a place name. 'Is were' mixes present and past forms; correct past tense is 'it was'. 'Used to' requires description in past tense. Suggested improvement: select the correct noun ('countryside' or specific place) and maintain past tense 'was' to match 'used to'.