Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce repetition and filler words, use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. Mention specific types of views and a brief reason to make the answer more informative and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I’m fascinated by landscapes, so whenever I travel I take my digital camera to capture coastal sunsets and mountain panoramas. For example, I recently photographed a cliffside at dusk because the light and colors were unforgettable.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid vague phrasing and repetition, and use linking words to connect reasons. Add a specific example of a rural scene to strengthen your answer.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views. Because they are calm and quiet, I feel more relaxed and focused when I photograph them. For instance, I enjoy photographing misty fields at dawn because the soft light and empty lanes create a peaceful atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating phrases, use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Mention a particular island or beach feature and a brief reason why it appeals to you to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I love photographing its islands and beaches. For example, I enjoy capturing the contrast between a black-sand beach and a nearby coral cove, which gives me varied subjects and lighting to work with.

× I've always been been fascinated by different landscapes, so whenever I travel I tend to take a pic, take digital camera to capture these small moments and keep them for future reference.

✓ I've always been fascinated by different landscapes, so whenever I travel I tend to take pictures and bring a digital camera to capture these small moments and keep them for future reference.

Error: Repetition of 'been' and awkward phrasing/omitted article. Type: sentence structure errors (ID 26) and article/errors in noun form (ID 22/1). Remove the duplicated 'been'. Use the plural 'pictures' instead of 'a pic' for natural phrasing, and include 'bring a' before 'digital camera' so the sentence has correct article and verb structure. Suggestion: proofread for duplicated words, use plural nouns for general activities, and include appropriate articles and verbs (e.g., 'bring a digital camera').

× Rural areas tend to be more calm, which I like.

✓ Rural areas tend to be calmer, which I like.

Error: comparative form and adjective usage. Type: incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13) and present tense descriptive form (ID 6). Use the comparative adjective 'calmer' rather than 'more calm' for natural English. Suggestion: use comparative '-er' for short adjectives (calm → calmer).

× I like being alone so the peace and quiet is very me.

✓ I like being alone, so peace and quiet suit me.

Error: incorrect pronoun/phrase 'is very me' and sentence structure. Type: incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and sentence structure errors (ID 26). 'Is very me' is nonstandard; use 'suit me' or 'I enjoy peace and quiet' to express preference. Suggestion: replace informal idiom with standard expression like 'suit me' or 'I enjoy'.

× So taking pictures of rural areas make me feel calm and more grounded and also I like seeing the beauty of them.

✓ So taking pictures of rural areas makes me feel calm and more grounded, and I also like seeing their beauty.

Error: subject-verb agreement and awkward pronoun phrase. Type: subject-verb agreement errors (ID 27) and incorrect pronoun use (ID 12). The gerund phrase 'taking pictures' is singular and requires 'makes'. Also 'the beauty of them' is awkward; use 'their beauty'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with the grammatical subject and use concise pronouns ('their').

× I like going to different islands and take pictures of the oceans and beaches.

✓ I like going to different islands and taking pictures of the oceans and beaches.

Error: parallel structure/verb form. Type: verb + -ing form (ID 8) and present tense issue (ID 6). After 'like' with two coordinated activities, use parallel gerund forms: 'going' and 'taking'. Suggestion: keep parallel structure by using the same verb form for coordinated actions (both gerunds).

× Each island has a different each island has different types of beaches.

✓ Each island has different types of beaches.

Error: redundancy and duplication. Type: sentence structure errors (ID 26). The phrase repeats itself; remove the duplicate 'each island has a different'. Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch accidental repetition and simplify to a single clear clause.

× This makes me more excited to take more pictures.

✓ This makes me more excited to take more pictures.

Error: minor redundancy ('more excited' and 'take more pictures' acceptable but repetitive). Type: incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13). The sentence is grammatically acceptable; consider simplifying to 'This makes me excited to take more pictures.' Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition of 'more' unless emphasis intended.