Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は意味が通じますが、時制や語法の誤り、一部冗長な表現が見られます。まずトピック文で直接「はい／いいえ」や好みを明確に述べ、その後に具体例と理由を短く続けると良いです。時制は一貫させ（過去の習慣は過去形、現在の習慣は現在形）、動詞や名詞の誤用（enjoyed → enjoy, keep memories → keep as memories）を直しましょう。また接続語（then, now, because）を適切に使って文の流れを整えるとより自然に聞こえます。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. When I was a university student I often took photos of the campus to keep them as memories. Now I usually take pictures in the city near my workplace because I enjoy the architecture and lively street scenes.

Sugerencia: 内容は伝わりますが、語彙と文法の誤りが多くあります（architectures → architecture, sea rights → seaside, landmakers → landmarks, Sky Tree → Skytree, skyline existing → skyline stand out / look impressive）。また、冒頭で直接好みを述べ、その理由を具体的に短く述べる構成にし、例は現在形や一般的事実で表現しましょう。接続詞（because, for example）を使って論理をつなぎ、冗長な語を避けてください。

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I find modern architecture and coastal cityscapes fascinating. For example, landmarks like Tokyo Tower and the Skytree stand out and create an impressive skyline.

Sugerencia: 意味は伝わりますが語彙と文法の誤り（bills → buildings, architectures → architecture, was → were / are）と口語的なフィラー（uh）が多く、流暢さが下がっています。冒頭で明確に好みを述べ、理由を具体的に述べた後、短い例を加える構成が望ましいです。過去の体験を語る際は過去形を統一し、重要語は正確に使いましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I love seeing historic buildings and coastal scenery. For example, the ancient architecture and charming Old Town in Greece were breathtaking and its narrow streets left a strong impression on me.

× When I was a university student over five years ago, I often took photos of the campuses to keep memories.

✓ When I was a university student over five years ago, I often took photos of the campus to keep memories.

The noun 'campuses' is plural but in this context 'the campus' is more natural when referring to the university grounds as a whole; however this could be style rather than strict tense. The primary issue noted is that the past action 'took' correctly uses past tense. Suggestion: use 'the campus' or 'campus grounds' for natural phrasing and keep past tense 'took' to match the time reference.

× But now I usually take pictures in the city and near my workplace because I enjoyed our architecture and the street scenes.

✓ But now I usually take pictures in the city and near my workplace because I enjoy our architecture and the street scenes.

The sentence shifts from present habitual 'now I usually take' to past 'enjoyed', which causes a tense inconsistency. Use present simple 'enjoy' to match the current habit. Suggestion: maintain present tense when explaining current preferences.

× I prefer urban views because modern architectures and sea rights are fascinating.

✓ I prefer urban views because modern architecture and seafronts are fascinating.

'Architectures' is incorrectly pluralized; 'architecture' is an uncountable noun. 'Sea rights' is not appropriate here; likely intended 'seafronts' or 'seaside'. Replace with 'seafronts' or 'the seaside'. Suggestion: use uncountable 'architecture' and an appropriate noun for coastal areas.

× For example, landmakers like Tokyo Tower and the Sky Tree were impressive architecture and that made the skyline existing.

✓ For example, landmarks like Tokyo Tower and the Sky Tree are impressive landmarks and they make the skyline striking.

Multiple issues: 'landmakers' is a wrong word; correct is 'landmarks'. 'Were impressive architecture' is awkward—use 'are impressive landmarks' or 'are impressive examples of architecture'. 'That made the skyline existing' is ungrammatical; perhaps intended 'they make the skyline stand out' or 'they add to the skyline'. Also tense: present is better when describing enduring features. Suggestion: use 'landmarks', keep present tense 'are', and rephrase to 'they make the skyline striking' or 'they contribute to the skyline'.

× I prefer bills in other countries because the coastal scenes and ancient architectures I see in Greece was breathtaking.

✓ I prefer buildings in other countries because the coastal scenes and ancient architecture I saw in Greece were breathtaking.

'Bills' is incorrect; 'buildings' is intended. 'Ancient architectures' should be 'ancient architecture' (uncountable). Tense inconsistency: 'I see' (present) with 'was' (past) should be consistent; because referring to a past trip, use past 'I saw' and plural agreement 'were' for 'scenes' and 'architecture' (collectively 'were breathtaking' is acceptable). Suggestion: use correct nouns and match past tense when describing past experiences.

× Uh, for example, uh, the charming Old Town and its narrow streets left a strong impression on me and made the trip very memorable.

✓ For example, the charming Old Town and its narrow streets left a strong impression on me and made the trip very memorable.

The sentence correctly uses past tense 'left' and 'made' for a past trip. The main correction is removing filler 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid filler words in formal speech and maintain past tense to describe past experiences.