Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 대답은 직접적이지만 문장이 단순하고 어색한 표현(예: "any other country's view")과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 더 자연스럽고 구체적으로 말하기 위해서는 토픽 문장을 명확히 하고, 한두 개의 구체적인 예와 이유를 덧붙이며 연결어를 사용하세요. 예: "I enjoy photographing landscapes, especially rivers and mountains, because..."처럼 시작하고 이유나 감정을 덧붙이세요. 또한 발음에서 망설임을 줄이고 문장을 완결형으로 말하는 연습을 하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing landscapes, especially rivers and mountains. For example, I like capturing the way sunlight reflects on a river at sunrise because it creates dramatic colors and a peaceful mood.

Sugerencia: 답변이 불완전하고 망설임(uh, umm)이 많으며 문장이 끝나지 않았습니다. 주제를 명확히 하고 이유를 구체적으로 설명해야 합니다. 연결어(so, because, therefore)와 구체적 이유(예: 신선한 공기, 조용함, 풍경의 다양성)를 사용하여 2~3문장으로 완결형 답변을 구성하세요. 또한 불필요한 반복과 채우기 표현을 줄이는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I love natural scenery such as mountains and rivers. The countryside feels peaceful and has cleaner air, which helps me relax and take better photos.

Sugerencia: 답변이 매우 어색하고 문장이 완결되지 않았습니다. 이유를 말하려다 멈추고 반복이 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접 답한 후 이유를 명확하게 제시하고 구체적인 정보(예: 방학 기간을 이용해 여행한다, 다른 문화와 경치를 경험하고 싶다)를 포함하세요. 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 설명하고 말할 때 불필요한 'uh'를 줄이도록 연습하세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I often travel during school vacations. For instance, during summer and winter breaks I visit foreign places to experience different landscapes and cultures, which inspires my photography.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views like river and mountains and any other country's view.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views like rivers and mountains and views of other countries.

The noun 'river' should be plural 'rivers' to match 'mountains' and the general idea of different views; also 'any other country's view' is awkward—use 'views of other countries' for natural, plural reference. Suggestion: use plural nouns when talking about things in general (rivers, mountains, views of other countries).

× Umm I prefer views in uh Nat natural sceneries like mountains and river because I like nature more than.

✓ Umm I prefer natural scenery like mountains and rivers because I like nature more.

Use 'natural scenery' (uncountable) or 'natural sceneries' is uncommon; 'river' should be plural 'rivers' to match 'mountains'. The sentence ends with 'more than' leaving out the comparison object—either remove 'more' or complete the comparison. Suggestion: say 'because I like nature more' by adding what it is compared to, e.g. 'more than cities', or simply 'because I like nature more.'

× I prefer views in other countries, uh, because, uh, because I'm, my job is uh, teacher in middle school, so I have every vacation, uh, in.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because my job is a middle school teacher, so I have vacations every year.

Use the article 'a' with singular occupations: 'a middle school teacher'. 'Vacation' should be plural 'vacations' or 'vacation every year' to show frequency. The original ends abruptly 'so I have every vacation, uh, in' which is incomplete—clarify as 'vacations every year' or 'time off during school vacations'. Suggestion: restructure: 'because my job is a middle school teacher, so I have vacations every year.'