Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Зосередьтеся на чіткій, стислій відповіді з правильною структурою: почніть з прямої теми (так/ні + причина), потім додайте 1–2 підтримуючі деталі без повторів та заповнювачів («umm», «uh»). Використовуйте зв’язки (for example, because, so) щоб зробити промову більш логічною. Також виправте незавершені слова або помилки (наприклад, «cap» невідомо що означає).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because photography helps me notice details I would otherwise miss. For example, I often use my smartphone to capture unusual angles and lighting, and I share the best shots with my friends to get feedback.

Sugerencia: Уникайте плутаних протиставлень і помилок у логіці (наприклад, «hustle and bustle of rural life» — це про місто). Побудуйте речення чітко: назвіть перевагу, дайте причину і конкретний приклад. Скоротіть до максимум 3–4 речень і використовуйте зв’язки (because, so, for instance).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer peaceful scenery and unique natural details. For instance, I often photograph sunrise over fields and rivers, which creates dramatic colors and calm compositions.

Sugerencia: Позбудьтеся зайвих слів і граматичних помилок (не поєднуйте "although" з "but"). Почніть зі ствердження, потім коротко поясніть чому, додайте конкретний приклад або почуття. Використовуйте зв’язки (because, since, for example) щоб пояснення було зрозумілим.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because travelling exposes me to different landscapes and cultures that inspire my photography. For example, photographing ancient architecture in Europe taught me to focus on patterns and light in ways I don't usually see at home.

× I as I live in the city, I love to escape from the hustle and bustle of rural life and spend some time in the nature, so that I take a lot of photos in nature and I love capturing the moments of breathtaking.

✓ As I live in the city, I love to escape from the hustle and bustle of city life and spend some time in nature, so I take a lot of photos there and I love capturing breathtaking moments.

The original sentence has several pronoun and article issues: 'I as I live' is ungrammatical; use 'As I live' to introduce the reason. 'The hustle and bustle of rural life' contradicts living in a city; it should be 'city life' or reworded. 'In the nature' incorrectly uses the definite article; 'in nature' is correct. 'So that I take' misuses the conjunction; use 'so I take' to show result. 'Photos in nature' is acceptable but 'there' clarifies location and avoids repetition. 'Capturing the moments of breathtaking' has incorrect word order and noun form; use 'breathtaking moments'. Suggestions: simplify the structure, use 'As' to start the clause, remove unnecessary articles, and place modifiers ('breathtaking') before nouns.

× Although I adore the views in my native country, but I would say that I love the views of other countries more because that seems to be more adventurous, as if you explore new angles, new parts of the world and that it inspires me a lot.

✓ Although I adore the views in my native country, I would say that I prefer the views of other countries because they seem more adventurous, as if you can explore new angles and parts of the world, and they inspire me a lot.

The sentence combines 'Although' with 'but', which is redundant; use one conjunction ('Although' without 'but') or start with 'I would say'. 'The views of other countries more' is awkward; 'I prefer the views of other countries' is clearer. 'Because that seems to be more adventurous' uses 'that' incorrectly and 'seems to be' is wordy; use 'they seem more adventurous' to match plural 'views'. 'As if you explore' should use modal 'can' or present continuous; 'as if you can explore' clarifies the potential. 'And that it inspires me a lot' has impersonal 'that it'; replace with 'and they inspire me a lot' to keep consistent plural subject. Suggestions: avoid redundant conjunctions, ensure pronoun agreement with plural nouns, and use clearer connectors.