Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, ngữ pháp chính xác và mạch lạc. Hãy sửa lỗi động từ (taking → take), dùng thì đúng (when I travel → when I travel / when I visit), tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về loại cảnh bạn thích. Ví dụ: nêu rõ phong cảnh (bờ biển, núi, kiến trúc) và cảm xúc/ý nghĩa của việc chụp ảnh. Nên chia thành 2-3 câu tối đa, dùng liên từ phù hợp (because, so, and) và từ vựng phong phú hơn (scenery, landscapes, peaceful, calming).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often take pictures of landscapes when I travel because I find coastal and mountain scenery particularly beautiful. Taking photos helps me feel calm and lets me remember peaceful moments.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (view→views, all of you→all views or everything). Giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn: nêu ví dụ cảnh nông thôn bạn thích (cánh đồng, làng mạc), so sánh ngắn với cảnh đô thị và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (because, so, whereas). Giữ 2-3 câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I live in a city and urban scenery feels familiar. Rural scenes like rice fields and small villages offer variety and a peaceful atmosphere, which I enjoy.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và hoàn thành câu. Thay 'historical realist' bằng 'historical sites' hoặc 'cultural landmarks'. Nên nêu ví dụ cụ thể (tên địa điểm, loại kiến trúc) và giải thích tại sao bạn thấy đẹp hoặc có ý nghĩa. Tránh để câu dang dở; dùng 2-3 câu với từ vựng chính xác hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I live in Vietnam and there are many historical sites, such as ancient temples and colonial buildings. These places are beautiful and remind me of my culture and history.

× Yes I do, I often taking pictures of different views when I travel to another country because it's very beautiful and when I'm see it I feel comfortable and all the picture I took is very peaceful.

✓ Yes, I do. I often take pictures of different views when I travel to another country because they are very beautiful, and when I see them I feel comfortable, and all the pictures I take are very peaceful.

Use of '-ing' after 'often' is incorrect; use base verb 'take'. Pronoun-number agreement: 'views' plural so use 'they' and 'them'. 'I'm see' is wrong; use simple present 'I see' for habitual actions. 'all the picture I took' mixes tenses and number: use present simple 'I take' and plural 'pictures'. Punctuation and sentence splitting improve clarity. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual actions (I often take, I feel), match plural nouns with plural pronouns (views -> they/them), and keep tense consistent.

× I prefer view in rural areas because now I'm living in urban areas and all of you in urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I am living in an urban area now and everything in the city feels the same to me.

Missing plural for 'view' -> 'views'. 'all of you in urban areas' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'everything in urban areas' or 'everything here'. Use 'an urban area' for one place of residence. Suggestions: use plural nouns when generalizing (views), use clear subjects ('everything' not 'all of you') and correct articles ('an urban area').

× It is similar in my eyes and I want a new thing.

✓ It looks similar to me, and I want something new.

'It is similar in my eyes' is unnatural; use 'looks similar to me'. 'a new thing' is awkward; use 'something new'. Suggestions: use natural collocations ('look similar to') and prefer 'something new' for general desire.

× I prefer views in my own country because now I'm living in Vietnam and there are many historical realist.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I am living in Vietnam now and there are many historical sites.

The word 'realist' is incorrect; likely intended 'sites' or 'places'. 'Historical sites' is correct collocation. Maintain word order 'I am living in Vietnam now'. Suggestions: use correct noun 'sites' for locations of historical interest and place 'now' at sentence end or after verb for clarity.

× It's very beautiful and.

✓ They are very beautiful.

Fragment 'It's very beautiful and.' is incomplete. Replace with full sentence matching plural subject 'views' -> 'They are very beautiful.' Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments; ensure subject and predicate present and agree in number.