ViewsPart 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Candidato

Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views 'cause I think it's help to improve my perspective and to visiting new places and it's it's like a memory to taking pictures. So yes, I like to take different pictures views.

Examinador

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Candidato

So personally I would prefer taking pictures in rural areas cause taking forest or some unique animals photography can be a unique memory. But in both we can take great pictures.

Examinador

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Candidato

I'm from Turkey and in my country we have so many destinations that we can take unique views, but why not in other countries? If I was another country, I would take views because I will bring memories in there. So both are OK.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Puntuación: 68.0

Sugerencia: Make your response more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and remove repetitions. For example, replace informal "'cause" with "because" and say "it helps" not "it's help". Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me see things from new perspectives. For example, photographing landscapes when I travel lets me remember places and notice small details I might otherwise miss.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Puntuación: 72.0

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give one clear reason with a specific example. Use linking words like "because" and "however." Fix small word order and phrasing errors (e.g., "forest or some unique animals photography" → "forest scenes or wildlife"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing rural areas because I enjoy forest scenes and wildlife, which feel more unique and peaceful. However, urban areas also offer interesting architecture and street scenes that can make great photos.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Puntuación: 64.0

Sugerencia: Make your comparison clearer and correct conditional tense. Begin with a direct statement of preference or say you have no strong preference, then support with a specific reason. Avoid incorrect grammar like "If I was another country" and awkward phrasing such as "bring memories in there."

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference — both are great. In Turkey we have many beautiful spots to photograph, but when I travel abroad I also enjoy capturing new landscapes and cultures to keep as memories.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views 'cause I think it's help to improve my perspective and to visiting new places and it's it's like a memory to taking pictures.

Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because I think it helps to improve my perspective, allows me to visit new places, and serves as a way to remember moments by taking pictures.

Errors: incorrect verb forms after modal/auxiliary and wrong use of 'to' before gerund. 'it's help' should be 'it helps' (third person singular present). 'to visiting' should be 'allows me to visit' or 'visiting' without 'to'. 'a memory to taking pictures' is ungrammatical; use 'a way to remember moments by taking pictures' or 'a memory of taking pictures'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and proper gerund/infinitive structures, and rephrase awkward noun phrases.'

Singular and plural issue

× So yes, I like to take different pictures views.

So yes, I like to take pictures of different views.

Error: incorrect word order and redundant plural marker. 'pictures views' incorrectly combines two nouns; use 'pictures of views' or 'pictures of different views.' Suggestion: use 'pictures of different views' for natural phrasing.'

Verb + -ing form

× So personally I would prefer taking pictures in rural areas cause taking forest or some unique animals photography can be a unique memory.

So personally I would prefer taking pictures in rural areas because photographing forests or unique animals can create special memories.

Errors: 'taking forest' is incorrect collocation; use 'photographing forests' or 'taking photos of forests.' 'some unique animals photography' is awkward; use 'photographing unique animals' or 'photos of unique animals.' Suggestion: use gerund forms correctly with appropriate noun forms and choose natural collocations like 'photographing forests'.

Sentence structure errors

× But in both we can take great pictures.

But in both kinds of places we can take great pictures.

Error: missing noun to clarify 'both' (both what). 'Both' needs a noun or context like 'both urban and rural areas' or 'both kinds of places.' Suggestion: add the noun phrase after 'both' for clarity.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I'm from Turkey and in my country we have so many destinations that we can take unique views, but why not in other countries?

I'm from Turkey, and in my country we have so many destinations where we can find unique views, but why not in other countries?

Error: 'that we can take unique views' uses 'that' and 'take' awkwardly; 'where' is better to indicate place and 'find' or 'see' fits 'unique views.' Suggestion: use relative adverb 'where' for places and choose verbs that collocate with 'views' such as 'see' or 'find.'

Conditional and modal tense issue (mix of past/future)

× If I was another country, I would take views because I will bring memories in there.

If I were in another country, I would take photos to create memories there.

Errors: 'If I was another country' is incorrect: speaker cannot be 'another country' and subjunctive 'If I were in another country' expresses hypothetical. 'I would take views' is unnatural; use 'take photos.' 'because I will bring memories in there' mixes conditional and future incorrectly and uses wrong verb 'bring' and preposition 'in there.' Suggestion: use subjunctive 'were,' match conditional 'would' for result clause, and say 'to create memories there.'

Sentence structure errors

× So both are OK.

So both are OK.

This sentence is grammatical but very short; no change needed. It correctly answers that both options are acceptable. Suggestion: you can expand to 'So both are OK for me' for clarity if desired.'

Vocabulario

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GreatConsiderable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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