Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and avoid redundancy. Add one specific supporting detail and use a linking word (for example, "because" or "so") to connect ideas. Keep it to no more than five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because everyone notices different details. For example, when I photograph a city street I focus on small gestures, while my friend notices the architecture. This helps me appreciate new perspectives and improve my photography.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence stating your preference, correct grammatical errors, and avoid repeating words. Provide one specific reason and an example, using a linking word such as "because" or "for instance" to connect your reason to the preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy wide grassy fields and open space. For instance, when I visit the countryside I like walking along long paths and photographing landscapes, which I find very relaxing.

Sugerencia: Correct word choice and grammar, and clarify your meaning. Replace incorrect words (e.g., "pray" -> "prefer") and restructure the sentence: state your preference, give a clear reason, and add a brief example. Use linking words like "because" and keep it concise.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because my hometown in Korea is dominated by high-rise apartment buildings. For example, when I travel abroad I enjoy seeing historical streets and varied architecture that I don't often see at home.

× I like taking pictures of different views because every people did not see same things, so I like to see every single person's different view.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because not everyone sees the same things, so I like to see each person's different view.

Use 'everyone' or 'everybody' instead of 'every people' for singular indefinite pronoun; use present simple 'sees' for habitual action (subject-verb agreement); use 'not everyone' to express negation more naturally; use 'each' or 'every single person' and singular 'view' to match meaning. Suggestion: say 'not everyone sees the same things' and 'each person's view.'

× I prefer both of area but especially rural area because I like to see wide grass fields like rural rural area so I prefer rural area more.

✓ I prefer both urban and rural areas, but especially rural areas because I like to see wide grass fields, so I prefer rural areas more.

Use plural 'areas' when referring generally to types of areas; include both 'urban and rural' for clarity; remove repeated word 'rural'; use commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: say 'both urban and rural areas' and keep 'rural areas' plural for general preference.

× I prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

This sentence is from the examiner; the student responses should answer the question. The issue here in transcript is misplaced speaker tag but grammatically the correct form uses 'Do you prefer...' as a question with auxiliary 'do.' Suggestion: use 'Do you prefer...' for present simple questions.

× I pray for views in other countries because in Korea, my hometown, all of views usually see the high buildings apartment, you know, so not that interested to me, so I prefer.

✓ I hope to see views in other countries because in Korea, my hometown, most views show tall apartment buildings, so I am not very interested in them; therefore I prefer other countries.

Use 'hope to see' or 'want to see' instead of 'pray for' in this context; 'views in Korea' not 'in Korea, my hometown'—restructure to clarify; 'most views show' better than 'all of views usually see'; use 'tall apartment buildings' not 'high buildings apartment'; 'interested in' requires 'interested in them' and use 'not very' for moderation. Suggestion: say 'I hope to see views in other countries' and 'most views show tall apartment buildings' and 'I am not very interested in them.'