Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and shows personal feeling, but it is somewhat long, repetitive and has grammatical errors. Make a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and correct phrasing (e.g., 'the best thing about it').

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing natural scenes because it relaxes me and preserves memories. For example, I often take photos of sunsets and rivers when I hike, so I can look back and remember the places I visited.

Sugerencia: The answer addresses the question but is unclear and contains filler words and grammar mistakes. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one clear reason with a linking word and a concise example. Use correct comparative language (e.g., 'more lively' not 'more life').

Ejemplo: I prefer rural, open areas because they feel more peaceful and vibrant. For instance, I like photographing wide fields and forests where there is more light and natural activity, which makes the pictures more interesting.

Sugerencia: This answer is confusing and contains inappropriate wording ('abuse of my country') and many hesitations. Provide a clear, direct response and avoid vague or incorrect phrases. Use one or two supporting points with linking words and a concrete example contrasting home and abroad.

Ejemplo: I enjoy photographing views both at home and abroad, but for different reasons. At home it’s easier to access familiar locations and capture personal memories, whereas abroad I find the scenery more exotic and memorable, such as photographing historic streets when I travel.

× Yes, I'd love to take pictures of different sides of nature and it gives me satisfaction and best thing of it is that it holds memories.

✓ Yes, I'd love to take pictures of different aspects of nature; it gives me satisfaction, and the best thing about it is that it preserves memories.

Pronoun and noun choices are awkward ('sides of nature', 'best thing of it') and 'it gives me satisfaction' is grammatically acceptable but stylistically improved. Replace 'sides' with 'aspects' and 'best thing of it' with 'the best thing about it'. Use 'preserves memories' instead of 'holds memories' for natural English.

× For me, it's hard to take one of them because I love both.

✓ For me, it's hard to choose between them because I love both.

The phrase 'take one of them' is incorrect for expressing preference; correct verb is 'choose' and preposition is 'between'. This fixes sentence structure and meaning.

× They have umm, different kind of aspect.

✓ They have different kinds of aspects.

Word order and agreement are wrong: 'different kind of aspect' should be pluralized to match 'they'. Use 'different kinds of aspects' or better 'different kinds of scenery' for clarity. 'Kind' and 'aspect' must agree in number.

× Both have some advantage of it.

✓ Both have some advantages.

'Some advantage of it' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'advantages' after 'both'. Remove 'of it'. This corrects quantifier and noun agreement.

× Uh, but for me, I can choose more open areas because it's more life there.

✓ But for me, I would choose more open areas because there is more life there.

'I can choose' is awkward for preference; use 'I would choose'. 'It's more life there' is ungrammatical — use 'there is more life there' or 'it is livelier'. This addresses present tense and sentence structure.

× I can't choose one of them, Uh, I find it difficult, but I can say that for me, it's more possible and easier to get abuse of my country.

✓ I can't choose one of them; I find it difficult, but I can say that for me it is more convenient and easier to take photographs in my country.

Several issues: 'more possible' is incorrect collocation — use 'more convenient' or 'easier'. 'get abuse of my country' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'take photos of my country' or 'make use of my country'. Replace with 'take photographs in my country'. This fixes modal/phrase usage and word choice.

× But umm, uh, in other countries, uh, I think it's more, uh, interesting because, uh, you can see and remember.

✓ But in other countries, I think it is more interesting because you can see new things and create lasting memories.

Sentence is wordy and vague ('see and remember'). Improve tense and clarity: 'see new things and create lasting memories' conveys the intended meaning and keeps present tense. Remove filler words for fluency.