Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “scenery” instead of “sceneries”; avoid “fitness”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph mountain landscapes and coastal sunsets because they help me remember the trip and share the experience with friends. Also, I try to capture small details like local plants or street scenes to make the photos more meaningful.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference, correct grammar, and use linking words to compare. Be specific about what you like in each setting and avoid vague phrases. Limit to 3–4 sentences with clear vocabulary (e.g., “historical buildings” instead of “do some old buildings”).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I enjoy natural landscapes. While cities have interesting skyscrapers and historical buildings, rural areas offer quiet fields, forests, and clear rivers which feel more relaxing. For example, I like watching mist over a valley in the morning because it feels peaceful and photogenic.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid fillers. Organize response with linking words (e.g., “however”, “also”) and provide a specific example each for home and abroad. Use natural phrasing and concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I like views both in my country and abroad because each offers different attractions. For instance, in China I enjoy dramatic mountain ranges like Huangshan, while abroad I appreciate seaside towns and different architectural styles that show local culture. Therefore, I choose destinations based on the kind of scenery and experiences I want.

× Definitely, I really love taking photos of different sceneries.

✓ Definitely, I really love taking photos of different scenery.

The noun 'scenery' is uncountable in English and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries'. Use 'scenery' to refer to landscapes in general or 'scenes' if you want a countable alternative.

× It is because that during the trip it is really meaningful and rewarding when taking different kind of fitness and also different kind of views can be the memories, especially some beautiful memories especially during the travel.

✓ It's because during trips it is meaningful and rewarding to take different kinds of photos, and the different views become memories, especially the beautiful ones from travel.

Multiple problems: 'It is because that' is unidiomatic — use 'It's because' or 'This is because'. 'different kind of' should be 'different kinds of' for plural variety. 'fitness' is incorrect word choice here; likely 'photos' or 'views' was intended. The clause 'different kind of views can be the memories' is awkward; rephrase to 'different views become memories'. Avoid repeating 'especially'. Use gerund 'to take' for purpose.

× I prefer views in the areas rather than urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban areas.

'In the areas' is vague and incorrect here. Use 'in rural areas' to contrast explicitly with 'urban areas'. Prepositions must match the noun phrase.

× It is because that in the rural areas I will see something that is much more different from the urban areas.

✓ It's because in rural areas I see things that are very different from those in urban areas.

Avoid 'It is because that' — use 'It's because'. 'Something that is much more different' is wordy and incorrect; use 'things that are very different'. 'The urban areas' should be 'those in urban areas' to refer back to 'things'.

× In urban areas, what you can see is the skyscrapers and do some old buildings, but in rural areas you can see something that's much more natural and there's some beautiful landscapes.

✓ In urban areas you can see skyscrapers and some old buildings, but in rural areas you can see much more natural scenes and beautiful landscapes.

'Do some old buildings' is incorrect verb usage; use 'some old buildings' as noun phrase. 'There's some beautiful landscapes' mixes singular 'there is' with plural 'landscapes' — use plural agreement 'beautiful landscapes' without 'there's' or 'there are beautiful landscapes'. 'Something that's much more natural' is vague; 'much more natural scenes' or 'more natural scenery' is clearer.

× All of them is really unique and meaningful.

✓ All of them are really unique and meaningful.

The subject 'All of them' is plural, so the verb should be plural 'are' not 'is'.

× And I prefer both of them.

✓ I prefer both.

Beginning a sentence with 'And' is informal; remove it. 'Both of them' is acceptable but 'I prefer both' is more natural here.

× It is because that both the Chinese views and also the foreign views can be unique and really interesting.

✓ It's because both Chinese views and foreign views can be unique and really interesting.

'Omit 'the' before adjectives used broadly (Chinese views, foreign views). 'It is because that' should be 'It's because'.

× And for me I just view the views during the travel.

✓ For me, I just look at the views while traveling.

'View the views' is redundant and awkward; 'look at the views' or 'enjoy the views' is better. 'During the travel' should be 'while traveling' or 'during travel'. Remove initial 'And'.

× It can, it is enough.

✓ That's enough for me.

'It can, it is enough' is incorrect and unidiomatic. Use a concise expression: 'That's enough for me' or 'That suffices'.

× And also in the other countries I also see some different cultures and different views.

✓ Also, in other countries I see different cultures and different views.

Remove redundant 'the' before 'other countries' and avoid repeating 'also'. Place 'also' appropriately at the start if needed.

× But in China some landscapes is really unique and magnificent.

✓ But in China some landscapes are really unique and magnificent.

'Some landscapes' is plural, so use the plural verb 'are' rather than 'is'.