Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Hạn chế tiếng lắp và từ không chính xác (ví dụ: “taking scenery of different view” nên là “taking pictures of different views”; “to hold the memories” nên là “to preserve memories”). Thêm một câu giải thích cụ thể hơn về lý do hoặc một ví dụ ngắn để câu trả lời giàu nội dung hơn. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me preserve memories of places I visit. For example, I often photograph sunsets and mountain landscapes to remember the atmosphere and colors.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, từ vựng sai và cấu trúc câu lặp. Tránh từ lạ như “controversy side” (có lẽ ý là “country side”) và dùng danh từ số nhiều/định mạo đúng (the countryside, rural areas). Sử dụng liên từ như “because” hoặc “while” để kết nối lý do và đưa ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn. Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because the countryside is more peaceful and relaxing than busy cities. There are mountains, rivers and open fields that make the scenery feel natural and refreshing, while urban views can be interesting for architecture.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (số ít/ số nhiều, thì, mạo từ) và tránh câu ngắt quãng. Nên nối câu với linking words như “because” hoặc “for example” và cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn. Giữ trong 3 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they give me a sense of novelty and excitement. Everything feels fresh abroad, from different architectural styles to unique landscapes. For example, seeing snow‑covered mountains or Western‑style buildings is always fascinating.

× I really enjoy taking scenery of different view 'cause I found it very interesting for me to hold the memories.

✓ I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because I find it very interesting to preserve the memories.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun while 'view' should be plural here; using 'taking pictures' is a natural collocation. 'Found' is past tense but the context is general preference, so use 'find'. 'Hold the memories' is unnatural; use 'preserve the memories'. Suggestions: use countable/plural forms when referring to multiple items (views), match tense to the present habitual action, and choose natural collocations such as 'taking pictures' and 'preserve memories'.

× I would prefer rural views. I find that controversy side more peaceful and relaxing compared to busy cities.

✓ I would prefer rural views. I find that countryside more peaceful and relaxing compared to busy cities.

The word 'controversy' is incorrect; the intended word is 'countryside'. 'Countryside' is a noun referring to rural areas. Suggestion: choose the correct vocabulary word; 'countryside' fits the meaning of rural environment.

× In rural area there are more mountain, river and open field which more which make the scenery look more natural and refreshing.

✓ In rural areas there are more mountains, rivers, and open fields, which make the scenery look more natural and refreshing.

Use plural nouns ('areas', 'mountains', 'rivers', 'fields') when speaking generally. Add commas and the relative pronoun 'which' to link the clause. Suggestion: pluralize when referring to general categories and ensure subject-verb agreement ('which make').

× On the other hand urban views can impressive.

✓ On the other hand, urban views can be impressive.

Missing verb 'be' is required to complete the adjective predicate ('can be impressive'). Also add a comma after the introductory phrase. Suggestion: include auxiliary verbs after modal 'can' when followed by adjectives? Actually 'can be' is correct; ensure sentence has a verb.

× I would say I prefer view in other country because they give me a sense of novelty and excitement.

✓ I would say I prefer views in other countries because they give me a sense of novelty and excitement.

Use plural 'views' and 'countries' for general preference. Ensure pronoun 'they' matches plural noun. Suggestion: pluralize nouns when speaking about general cases.

× When I travel abroad. Everything feel fresh and different from the architecture to the natural landscape.

✓ When I travel abroad, everything feels fresh and different, from the architecture to the natural landscape.

The first fragment was a sentence fragment; combine clauses with a comma. 'Everything' requires singular verb 'feels'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and ensure subject-verb agreement in number.

× Uh, for instance seeing snow covered mountain or western side building, it's quite fascinating.

✓ For instance, seeing snow-covered mountains or Western-style buildings is quite fascinating.

Use hyphen 'snow-covered' as a compound adjective and pluralize 'mountains' and 'buildings' for general statements. 'Western-side building' is unnatural; 'Western-style building' is correct. Also make the verb agree with the gerund phrase 'seeing ... is'. Suggestion: use hyphens for compound adjectives, plural nouns for general examples, and correct adjective forms like 'Western-style'.