Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce repetition, use correct tense and clear phrasing, and keep answer concise (1–3 sentences). Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and a reason. Use linking words like "because" or "so" appropriately.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me remember special moments. For example, when I see a beautiful sunset I take a picture so I can look back and relive the feeling.

Sugerencia: Answer directly (urban or rural), avoid unclear phrases, and give one clear, specific reason with correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words like "because" and give an example to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural. For instance, I enjoy photographing birds and mountains in the countryside because the scenery is peaceful and full of wildlife.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly (own country or other countries), give a specific reason and a brief example. Use correct sentence structure and avoid filler words. Keep to 1–3 coherent sentences and include linking words like "because" or "for example."

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and they have varied landscapes. For example, in Salem there are dams, waterfalls and zoos that make great places for photography.

× That's why I am capture capturing that face.

✓ That's why I capture that face. OR That's why I am capturing that face.

The original mixes the base form 'capture' with the present participle 'capturing', creating an ungrammatical construction. Use either simple present ('I capture') to state a habitual action or present continuous ('I am capturing') to describe an action happening now. Choose based on intended meaning.

× Then I am enjoying that moment.

✓ Then I enjoy that moment. OR Then I am enjoying the moment.

The sentence uses present continuous where simple present is more natural for habitual actions. Use 'I enjoy' for general habits, or 'I am enjoying' to emphasize a current ongoing feeling; do not mix formats.

× I need to capture in the in the same time it is remembered to my memory, it is the one of the memorable moment.

✓ I try to capture it at the same time so it will be remembered; it is one of my memorable moments.

The original has word order and preposition errors and an unnatural phrase 'remembered to my memory'. Correct structure uses 'capture it at the same time' and 'remembered' with a clear subject; use 'one of my memorable moments' for natural expression.

× That's why I am capturing and.

✓ That's why I am capturing it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' and repeats the progressive form unnecessarily. Complete the sentence with the object 'it' and remove the trailing conjunction. Use 'I am capturing it' for an ongoing action.

× I always prepare you in urban areas because it is the beautiful view in the urban.

✓ I always prefer urban areas because the views there are beautiful.

'Prepare you' is incorrect verb choice; 'prefer' fits the question. 'the beautiful view in the urban' is ungrammatical—use plural 'views' and 'urban areas' or 'the city'. Also adjust article placement: 'the views there are beautiful.'

× Lots of mountains there in the mountain, lots of trees there in the trees, lots of birds is there.

✓ There are many mountains, many trees, and many birds there.

Repeated phrases 'in the mountain/trees' are incorrect. Use plural nouns with 'many' and correct subject-verb agreement: 'birds are there' not 'is there'. Also use the existential structure 'There are' for listing.

× I like to capture capture the birds in my own eyes.

✓ I like to capture the birds with my own eyes. OR I like to photograph birds myself.

The verb is repeated and 'in my own eyes' is an unnatural prepositional phrase for photographing; 'with my own eyes' or 'photograph birds myself' are natural. Remove duplication.

× Seeing that moment I am enjoying very lot.

✓ Seeing that moment, I enjoy it a lot. OR When I see that moment, I enjoy it very much.

'I am enjoying very lot' is incorrect: use 'I enjoy it a lot' (simple present) for habitual feelings, or 'I am enjoying it very much' for a current experience. 'a lot' or 'very much' are the correct adverbial forms.

× I always would like to prepare in one country because you are very beautiful in the own country.

✓ I would always like to travel within my own country because it is very beautiful.

'would like to prepare in one country' is wrong verb choice; likely intended 'would like to stay/travel' or 'prefer'. Also 'you are very beautiful in the own country' is incorrect pronoun use and article use—replace with 'it is very beautiful' referring to the country.

× In my place in the Salem, it's a there it was there are dams and zoos and mountains and falls.

✓ In my hometown Salem, there are dams, zoos, mountains, and waterfalls.

The original mixes tenses and has redundant words ('it's a there it was there'). Use 'there are' for existence and the plural 'waterfalls' for 'falls'; 'hometown Salem' clarifies meaning.

× Everything it was there.

✓ Everything is there.

The original uses unnecessary pronoun 'it' and past tense 'was'. Use present tense 'is' for general facts: 'Everything is there.'

× It is the beautiful to capture the picture in the falls.

✓ It is beautiful to take pictures at the waterfalls. OR It's great to photograph the waterfalls.

'in the falls' is an incorrect preposition; use 'at the waterfalls' or 'of the waterfalls'. Also 'capture the picture' is awkward—use 'take pictures' or 'photograph'. Adjust article: 'It is beautiful' or 'It's beautiful' without 'the'.