Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and finish the sentence fully. Pay attention to verb forms, articles, and word choice (e.g., 'taking pictures', 'when I go outside', 'I can save them').

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I go outside I often photograph landscapes or cityscapes to preserve memories, and then I save and sometimes share the best shots on social media.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference in the first sentence, then support it with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'also'). Use correct nouns and word order ('rural areas', 'natural greenery', 'hill stations') and avoid fragmented or unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because there is more natural greenery and peaceful scenery. For example, hill stations often have rolling hills and forests, which make beautiful subjects for landscape photos.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with correct grammar and a brief reason. Use one linking word to connect the reason and give a concise example. Avoid awkward phrases like 'delightness' and incorrect pluralization ('another countries').

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because new places often surprise me with different landscapes and cultures. For instance, traveling abroad once gave me a chance to photograph colorful markets and coastal cliffs that I wouldn't find at home.

× Yes, I love to taking picture of different views, especially I'm going when I'm going outside all that time I can remember my way that I can make that memories.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. Especially when I go outside, I can remember ways to create those memories.

The verb after 'love' should be the gerund without 'to' (love taking), not 'to taking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Picture' should be plural when referring generally to photos (singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'I'm going when I'm going outside all that time' is incorrect tense and structure; use simple present 'when I go outside' to express habitual action (present tense issue, ID 6). 'My way that I can make that memories' is unclear and ungrammatical; 'ways to create those memories' corrects noun number and structure. Suggestion: use 'love taking pictures', use simple present for habits, and ensure plural nouns when speaking generally.

× I can save, I can share for social media.

✓ I can save and share them on social media.

This fragment uses repetitive clauses awkwardly and omits an object: 'save' and 'share' need an object (the photos). Also use the conjunction 'and' rather than repeating 'I can' for conciseness (sentence structure error, ID 26). Use the preposition 'on' with 'social media' (preposition issue, ID 11). Suggestion: combine verbs with a shared object and use correct preposition: 'save and share them on social media.'

× Also I think it's a ho fun hobby, but sometime I.

✓ Also, I think it's a fun hobby, but sometimes I don't.

'ho' is a typo and should be 'a' omitted or 'a fun hobby' (word choice/adjective error, ID 13). 'sometime I.' is an incomplete sentence missing a verb or auxiliary; likely intended 'sometimes I don't' or 'sometimes I stop'—here 'sometimes I don't' completes the contrast (sentence structure error, ID 26). Suggestion: proofread for typos and complete clauses with verbs.

× I would say I prefer rural areas views because there is landscape natural greenery.

✓ I would say I prefer views of rural areas because there is natural greenery and landscape.

'rural areas views' has incorrect word order; use 'views of rural areas' (sentence structure/order issue, ID 26). 'there is landscape natural greenery' has incorrect adjective order and article use; 'natural greenery and landscape' or 'a natural landscape and greenery' is better (incorrect order of adjectives ID 18 and article errors ID 22). Suggestion: use 'views of rural areas' and place adjectives before nouns in correct order or use noun phrases like 'natural greenery'.

× You can find a natural land or trees sometime manual go in the hill station that is also a rural area.

✓ You can find natural land or trees; sometimes people go to hill stations, which are also rural areas.

This sentence mixes ideas and has incorrect words ('manual go'). It needs restructuring (sentence structure error, ID 26). 'a natural land' is unnatural; use 'natural land' or 'natural landscape' (article error, ID 22). 'sometime manual go' likely intends 'sometimes people go' (pronoun/word choice, ID 12). Suggestion: separate ideas into two clauses and use 'people' for general subject.

× That time you will find the rural that hills there.

✓ At that time you will find rural hills there.

Unnecessary words 'the' and misplaced 'that' make the sentence ungrammatical (incorrect use of the definite article ID 17 and sentence structure error ID 26). Better: 'you will find rural hills there' or simply 'you will find hills there.' Suggestion: remove extra words and use correct article or omit it when speaking generally.

× But it's I love to take photos from R.

✓ But I love to take photos there.

'But it's I love to take photos from R' is ungrammatical; 'it's' and 'I' conflict and 'from R' is unclear (sentence structure error ID 26). Use 'there' to refer back to the place or name the place clearly. Suggestion: keep subject and verb together: 'I love to take photos there.'

× I would prefer another countries actually if you go another countries that time you will be delighted and your delightness gives you a kick to click a photograph of the views and you will save this one as memories and often used for social media.

✓ I would prefer other countries. Actually, when you go to other countries, you will be delighted, and your delight gives you a kick to take photographs of the views; you will save them as memories and often use them on social media.

'another countries' is incorrect: 'another' goes with singular count nouns; use 'other countries' (article/quantifier error ID 22/14). 'if you go another countries' needs preposition 'to' and correct plural 'countries' (preposition issue ID 11 and singular/plural ID 1). 'delightness' is not a standard noun; use 'delight' or 'joy' (word choice/adjective issue ID 13). 'click a photograph' is informal but acceptable; better 'take photographs' and use plural pronouns consistently: 'them'/'them' (pronoun issue ID 12). 'save this one as memories' wrong determiner and noun number; use 'save them as memories' (article/number issue ID 22/1). 'often used for social media' missing subject and wrong tense; use 'and often use them on social media' (sentence structure issue ID 26 and preposition ID 11). Suggestion: use 'other countries', 'go to', 'delight', 'take photographs', and match pronouns and plurality.