Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 用更自然和准确的句子表达，避免语法错误和冗余。可以把回答控制在不超过五句内，先给出主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达连贯。例如修改时注意主谓一致（scenery 是不可数）和时态搭配，并把“my mood will keep”改为更合适的表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially sunsets, mountains and interesting buildings. These scenes always make me feel calm and happy, so I often stop to take photos when I travel or walk around my city.

Sugerencia: 回答要更简练并用正确的表达来说明原因和细节。避免重复短语（如“in rural areas”多次出现）并修正不通顺的句子（最后一句不明确）。可以用连接词（for example, because, so）来组织理由，提供具体例子来增强说服力。

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural. For example, I enjoy listening to birds, walking among trees and seeing open fields, which helps me relax and feel closer to nature.

Sugerencia: 避免语法和用词错误，简化句子并按逻辑顺序展开理由。用更自然的连接词（for example, also, moreover）并提供具体细节或例子。将“those people”替换为更具体的表述（local people, locals），并将“varied sceneries”改为“a wider variety of scenery”。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer a wider variety of scenery. For instance, I love exploring coastal towns, historic city centers and mountain villages abroad; I also enjoy tasting local foods and meeting local people to learn about their culture.

× I think although these beautiful scenery makes me feel really happy and comfortable, my mood will keep.

✓ I think although these beautiful sceneries/these beautiful scenes make me feel really happy and comfortable, my good mood continues.

问题类型：主谓一致与单复数不一致（可归于 1 和 27）。原句中“these beautiful scenery”使用了复指示词“these”但名词“scenery”通常为不可数或用复数形式“sceneries/scenes”；另外动词应与复数主语一致，故用“make”而非“makes”。“my mood will keep”结构不完整，动词“keep”后需宾语或改为“不及物”表达持续应使用“continues”或“lasts”。建议用法：要么把“scenery”改为不可数单数并改指示词为“this”并用单数动词；或把“scenery”改为可数复数“sceneries/scenes”并用复数动词；表示情绪持续用“continues/lasts”更自然。

× I prefer views in rural areas because in rural areas I can enjoy many natural things such as trees, mountains and birds and so on.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there I can enjoy many natural things such as trees, mountains and birds.

问题类型：句子结构与代词/冗余用词（可归于11 和 26）。原句重复使用“in rural areas”显得啰嗦，且“and so on”与“such as”重复并不必要。将地点副词“there”替代第二次词组更简洁自然。还可删去“and so on”。

× Those of natural things made me close that.

✓ Those natural things made me feel close to nature.

问题类型：代词使用不当与句子结构错误（12 和 26）。原句“Those of natural things”不符合英语习惯，应为“Those natural things”或“Those things in nature”。“made me close that”结构错误，“close”需与“to”搭配表示“靠近/亲近”，且“that”位置不当。若要表达“使我感到亲近自然”，应说“made me feel close to nature”。建议：注意固定搭配“be close to sth”和“feel close to sth”。

× I prefer views in other countries because in other countries I can see varied sceneries.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I can see a variety of scenery/varied scenery there.

问题类型：冠词/名词形式错误（17 和 1）。“sceneries”很少用，通常用不可数名词“scenery”或短语“a variety of scenery/varied scenery”。重复使用“in other countries”显得冗余，可用“there”代替。建议使用不可数形式或用复数可数名词“scenes”视语境而定。

× In addition that I can enjoy different delicious foods and the cultures, meanwhile I can see those people.

✓ In addition, I can enjoy different delicious foods and cultures, and I can meet/see local people.

问题类型：句子结构与冠词/并列结构错误（26 和 17）。原句“In addition that I can...”结构错误，应为“In addition, I can...”。“the cultures”不需要定冠词，直接用“cultures”更自然；“meanwhile”与前面连词重复且位置不当，改为连接词“and”或分句更清晰。“see those people”含糊且不自然，若指当地人应说“meet local people”或“see local people”。建议注意连接词位置和并列结构一致性。