Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and add one specific detail or brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views, especially when I travel. For example, on a recent trip to Hoi An I photographed the lantern-lit streets because the colors captured the atmosphere. Taking pictures helps me remember places and share those memories with my family.

Sugerencia: Respond with a clear present-tense preference sentence, reduce hesitation, and provide one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more peaceful. For instance, when I visit the countryside I enjoy watching birds and walking among green fields, which helps me relax and feel refreshed.

Sugerencia: Clarify the meaning and use correct tense and grammar. Start with a direct statement of preference, give one specific reason and a short example of what you would photograph or share.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they are unfamiliar and more interesting to me. For example, I like photographing unique architecture or local markets when I travel so I can show those photos to my family when I return home.

× Absolutely yes, especially when we are traveling.

✓ Absolutely, especially when we travel.

Use simple present 'we travel' for general habits instead of present continuous 'we are traveling'. Use a comma after 'Absolutely' for clarity.

× If it's new for me, I definitely go and take a picture for me to have a remembrance of the different places.

✓ If it's new to me, I definitely go and take a picture to have a memento of the different places.

Use 'new to me' not 'new for me' (preposition error) and use 'to have' not 'for me to have' for purpose. 'Remembrance' is awkward; 'memento' or 'memory' is more natural.

× Uh, traveling and taking pictures are great because if you want to go back with the memory you could have.

✓ Traveling and taking pictures are great because if you want to remember a place you can.

Original sentence mixes idioms incorrectly. Use 'remember' and 'can' for ability in general (present). 'Go back with the memory you could have' is ungrammatical and unclear.

× I preferred rural areas view because it's quieter, there's a lot of beautiful trees or grasses and animals around the area.

✓ I prefer rural views because they're quieter and there are many beautiful trees, grasses, and animals in the area.

'Preferred' (past) should be 'prefer' (present) to answer current preference. Use plural 'views' and 'there are' for plural existence. Use 'many' for countable items and list nouns properly.

× It's just like it's a relaxing, uh, serene, a memory for me.

✓ It's just relaxing and serene; it creates a lasting memory for me.

Original has redundant and disordered adjectives and articles. Use parallel adjectives 'relaxing and serene' and a clear noun phrase 'lasting memory'.

× I prefer to use that I could see in other country.

✓ I prefer the views I can see in other countries.

'Prefer to use that I could see' is ungrammatical. Use 'prefer the views I can see' and plural 'other countries'. Use 'can' for present ability.

× It is because it's not familiar to me and it's not my everyday life seeing those scenery.

✓ This is because they are unfamiliar to me and not part of my everyday life to see those scenes.

Use 'they are unfamiliar' to agree in number with 'views/scenes'. 'Scenery' is uncountable; use 'scenes' or 'scenery' with correct structure.

× If I will take a picture in other country, I could show you so my family once I go back to my home country.

✓ If I take pictures in another country, I can show them to my family once I go back to my home country.

Conditional sentences in English normally use present tense in the 'if' clause ('If I take') not 'will'. Use 'can' for ability. 'Show them to my family' is correct object placement and use plural 'pictures' or 'a picture' and 'another country'.