Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and use accurate vocabulary. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two clear supporting details using linking words. Correct word choices (e.g. “views” not “videos”, “by bus or train” not “by mass or a train”) and simpler sentence structure will improve clarity. Limit to up to 4–5 sentences and avoid redundant phrases like “personally” or “I will have a fun.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially during night travel. For example, when I travel by bus or train I like to capture city lights and reflections. I take pictures to remember the places I visit and to share them with my family, which makes the trips feel special.

Sugerencia: Organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons linked with linking words (because, for example). Avoid filler sounds and unclear phrases like “sky 10” or “who is is architect.” Use precise vocabulary (architecture, lighting, viewpoints) and keep sentences concise. Mention a specific example to make your response more concrete.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the dramatic city architecture and lighting at night. For example, I like photographing modern buildings and bridges that look striking from different angles. I also enjoy city parks and playgrounds because they add contrast and human activity to my photos.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer followed by clear reasons and one specific example. Use correct grammar and singular/plural forms (my country, places I have not visited). Avoid repetitive phrases like “personally” and “my personal own countries.” Explain why your country appeals to you (culture, familiarity, variety) to add content and specificity.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel comfortable there and there are many places I haven’t explored yet. For example, I plan to visit a historic coastal town next year because it offers unique scenery and local culture. I enjoy recommending local spots to friends because I know them well and they feel authentic.

× 'Yes I do like taking pictures at different videos especially on night travel somewhere by mass or a train.'

✓ 'Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel at night by bus or train.'

'videos' is incorrect plural for 'views' (wrong word choice); 'on night travel' is ungrammatical and should be 'when I travel at night'; 'by mass' is wrong word choice and should be 'by bus'; also add commas for clarity. Improve by choosing correct vocabulary (view, bus) and correct time clause ordering.'

× 'This time I take a fixer and hope to help me to remember where I went and I show it with my family and I will have a fun and it's really memorable for me.'

✓ 'This time I took a camera and hope it will help me remember where I went; I show the photos to my family, and it is really memorable for me.'

'take a fixer' is incorrect vocabulary; likely intended past action so use past tense 'took' or present perfect depending on context; 'help me to remember' is awkward — use 'help me remember'; 'I will have a fun' is ungrammatical — use 'I had fun' or 'it is fun'; choose consistent tense. Suggest using 'took a camera' and past or present perfect to match travel context.'

× 'I definitely prefer urban views, something with uh, sky 10 at night and also there is a lot of light who is is architect.'

✓ 'I definitely prefer urban views, something with a skyline at night, and there is also a lot of illuminated architecture.'

'sky 10' is incorrect phrase; likely 'skyline'; 'who is is architect' is ungrammatical and has incorrect pronoun and verb form. Use noun phrase 'illuminated architecture' or 'architectural lighting.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word choice.'

× 'Uh, different angles and different design is really give me pleasure and most especially I like park views and also other playgrounds.'

✓ 'Different angles and designs really give me pleasure, and I especially like park views and playgrounds.'

'different design is really give me pleasure' has adjective/noun agreement and verb form errors — 'designs' (plural) with plural subject 'angles and designs' requires plural verb 'give'. 'most especially' is wordy; use 'especially'. Rearrange for natural word order.'

× 'I personally prefer my own countries.'

✓ 'I personally prefer my own country.'

'countries' is plural but speaker refers to their own country (singular). Use 'country' for singular reference. If they meant multiple countries, rephrase to 'my own countries' and clarify.'

× 'Uh, my own countries is really compatible and uh, tremendous for me.'

✓ 'My country is really comfortable and, uh, meaningful to me.'

'compatible' is incorrect adjective for expressing suitability or comfort; 'tremendous for me' is awkward. Also subject-verb agreement: 'my own countries is' mixes plural noun with singular verb. Use 'My country is' and choose appropriate adjectives like 'comfortable' or 'meaningful.'

× 'There is a lot of place I have not visit yet, but I want to visit there and I personally recommend to my personal own countries.'

✓ 'There are a lot of places I have not visited yet, but I want to visit them, and I would personally recommend my country.'

'There is' with plural 'places' is wrong — use 'There are'; 'place' should be plural 'places'; 'have not visit' should be past participle 'have not visited'; 'visit there' should be 'visit them' or 'visit those places'; 'recommend to my personal own countries' is ungrammatical — use 'recommend my country' or 'recommend it to others.'