Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), and give 1–2 specific examples with brief reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, such as). Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing nature. For example, I often photograph the sea for its vastness and forests for their textures. I also take photos wherever I travel to preserve memories.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with correct grammar and specific supporting details. Use plural/singular correctly and link ideas (for example, for instance, because). Avoid fillers and repeat vocabulary by using synonyms (countryside, wildlife).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer more natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing gardens, mountains, and wildlife because they feel peaceful and offer varied subjects. This makes taking pictures more enjoyable for me.

Sugerencia: Be specific and grammatical. Start with a clear preference, then give 2 concise reasons with examples. Use linking words (because, however, while) and correct article use and verb forms.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often have unique landscapes and architecture that are different from what I see at home. For example, abroad I might find unusual coastal cliffs or historic streets, whereas my hometown mainly has houses and ordinary roads.

× I like taking picture for different views, uh, for example, some views, uh, are uh, special for me, like uh, a sea or forest or sometime where do I like when I go? Any place to take?

✓ I like taking pictures of different views. For example, some views are special to me, like the sea or a forest, or sometimes I like to take pictures wherever I go.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match the general activity of taking many photos (singular/plural issue). 'Taking picture for' is incorrect preposition and noun choice; use 'taking pictures of'. 'A sea' should be 'the sea' or just 'the sea' as a specific type of view (article use). 'Sometime where do I like when I go? Any place to take?' is ungrammatical (sentence structure errors) and was rephrased to 'sometimes I like to take pictures wherever I go' to convey the intended meaning and correct verb forms and word order.

× I prefer a rural areas because there are many thing, uh, I like it in this area.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there are many things I like in them.

'A rural areas' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'areas' — change to 'rural areas' (singular/plural issue). 'Many thing' should be plural 'many things'. 'I like it in this area' has pronoun disagreement and article issues; corrected to 'I like in them' to refer to 'rural areas' (pronoun and number agreement).

× I prefer a rural areas because there are many thing, uh, I like it in this area. For example, umm, garden, mountain, uh, animals.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there are many things I like there. For example, gardens, mountains, and animals.

List items need plural forms 'gardens' and 'mountains' to match 'many things' (singular/plural and noun form). 'I like it in this area' used incorrect preposition and pronoun; use 'there' to indicate location. Also items in a list require parallel forms and proper articles or pluralization.

× I like that so much so I love to take picture for them.

✓ I like them so much, so I love taking pictures of them.

Use gerund 'taking' after 'love' or 'love to take' — both are possible, but 'taking pictures of them' is more natural. 'Take picture for them' is incorrect preposition and singular/plural; change to 'taking pictures of them' (verb + -ing form and preposition/noun number).

× I prefer the views for another country because my country has a lot of home and road didn't have anything special.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because my country has a lot of houses and roads that are not very special.

Use 'in other countries' rather than 'for another country' (preposition and noun choice). 'A lot of home and road' should be 'a lot of houses and roads' (countable noun plural forms). 'Didn't have anything special' mixes tenses and lacks a subject; rewrite as 'that are not very special' to describe them (relative clause and present simple descriptive tense).

× But when I go outside my country I see a many different uh to take picture.

✓ But when I go outside my country I see many different things to take pictures of.

'A many' is incorrect; use 'many' without 'a' (singular/plural issue). 'Different uh to take picture' is missing the noun 'things' and needs 'pictures' plural and preposition 'of' at the end: 'things to take pictures of'. This corrects noun presence, number, and preposition use.