Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and reduce hesitation. Be concise with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, replace phrases like "to taking" with "taking" and avoid repeating similar ideas (memorial, cherish).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax and preserves memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets and mountain scenes and then share them with friends on social media so we can remember trips together.

Sugerencia: Focus on a clear preference with correct phrasing and provide specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and incorrect prepositions (use "I prefer" not "I prefer to see views"). Give one or two concrete examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I love greenery and peaceful natural settings. For instance, I enjoy walking through forests and lakeside paths since cities feel too crowded and noisy for me.

Sugerencia: Use a clear, balanced reply and correct grammar: say "It depends on the view" and avoid repetition. State reasons and give a specific example comparing a domestic place with an international one. Use linking words like "however" or "for example."

Ejemplo: It depends on the view; I enjoy both. For example, I love exploring natural spots in India such as the Himalayas because they are close and familiar. However, I would also like to visit scenic places abroad, like the Swiss Alps, to experience different landscapes and cultures.

× Yes, I like to taking a picture of different views at its rejuvenate my mind and it's also, uh, become a memorial memorable for me.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they rejuvenate my mind and also become memorable for me.

The phrase 'to taking' is incorrect: after 'like' use the gerund 'taking' or the infinitive 'to take', not 'to taking'. 'A picture' should be plural 'pictures' when talking generally. 'At its rejuvenate' is incorrect structure and tense; use 'because they rejuvenate my mind' with correct subject-verb agreement. 'Memorial' is incorrect word choice; use 'memorable'. Improve by using 'I like taking pictures of different views because they rejuvenate my mind and are memorable.'

× Uh, it's cherish my memory in the upcoming years.

✓ It cherishes my memories in the coming years.

'It's cherish' mixes contraction 'it's' (it is) with base verb 'cherish' incorrectly. Use the simple present 'cherishes' to agree with subject 'it' (subject-verb agreement). Also use plural 'memories' for general reference and 'coming years' is more natural than 'upcoming years.'

× It's also the different scenery.

✓ There are also different sceneries.

'It's also the different scenery' is ungrammatical: 'It's' (it is) cannot introduce plural 'different scenery'. Use 'There are' for existence and plural noun 'sceneries' or 'different scenic views.' Alternatively say 'The scenery is different.'

× I also share my photos on the social media with my friends.

✓ I also share my photos on social media with my friends.

Use 'on social media' without the definite article 'the' in general contexts. 'On the social media' is wrong when speaking generally. Keep 'with my friends' to indicate who you share with.

× I prefer to see views in open areas at I love to greenery and I love to nature places.

✓ I prefer to see views in open areas because I love greenery and natural places.

'At I love to greenery' is incorrect: use a conjunction 'because' to connect clauses. 'Love to greenery' is wrong — 'love greenery' or 'love green areas.' 'Nature places' should be 'natural places.' Remove extra 'to' before verbs when unnecessary.

× Umm I I admire to visit natural places.

✓ Um, I admire visiting natural places.

'Admire to visit' is incorrect: the verb 'admire' is typically followed by a gerund when referring to an action you enjoy doing: 'admire visiting' or better 'I like visiting' or 'I enjoy visiting.' Alternatively say 'I would like to visit.'

× I avoid to umm cities as it's too rush and I don't like it.

✓ I avoid cities because they are too crowded and I don't like them.

Use 'avoid cities' (no 'to'). 'It's too rush' is incorrect: 'rush' is a noun; use 'crowded' or 'busy.' Maintain plural agreement 'they are' and use 'them' to refer to cities.

× It really depend on the view, but uh, as I belong to India and there's lots of places where there they are close to nature views.

✓ It really depends on the view, but since I belong to India, there are lots of places that are close to natural scenery.

'Depend' needs third person singular 'depends' to agree with 'it.' 'As I belong to India' is acceptable but 'since' is more natural. 'There's lots of places' is incorrect: use 'there are lots of places' for plural. 'Where there they are' is redundant; use 'that are' or 'which are.' 'Nature views' should be 'natural scenery.'

× So I love to, uh, I admire to explore that one as well.

✓ So I love to explore those places as well.

Avoid 'admire to explore'—use 'love to explore' or 'admire exploring.' 'That one' is vague; use 'those places.' Keep verb form consistent: 'love to explore.'

× But I also heard other countries, they have a beautiful sceneries and beautiful places that admire their beauty.

✓ But I have also heard that other countries have beautiful scenery and beautiful places that showcase their beauty.

'Omitted connector' — use 'I have heard that other countries have...' 'A beautiful sceneries' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'sceneries'; use 'beautiful scenery' (uncountable) or 'beautiful sceneries' without 'a.' 'That admire their beauty' incorrectly uses 'admire'; inanimate places do not 'admire'—use 'that showcase their beauty' or 'that demonstrate their beauty.'