Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Perbaiki kefasihan dan kejelasan: kurangi pengulangan dan pengisian (uh, um). Susun jawaban dengan kalimat topik jelas, lalu beri satu atau dua detail spesifik tentang apa yang Anda suka (misalnya gunung, pantai, sawah). Gunakan penghubung sederhana jika perlu (for example, because). Latih pengucapan nama tempat jika perlu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, in Lombok I often photograph wide green rice fields and coastal sunsets because they have vivid colors and peaceful atmospheres.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki relevansi dan kejelasan: jawab langsung apakah Anda lebih suka kota atau pedesaan, lalu beri alasan spesifik. Hindari kata-kata yang tidak jelas (Hampton? Soldier tea?). Jika menyebut tempat, gunakan nama yang benar. Gunakan struktur: topik + alasan + contoh singkat.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more natural. For example, I like seeing open fields and small villages, which feel relaxing compared to busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Jelaskan pilihan dengan alasan konkret: nyatakan apakah Anda lebih suka pemandangan di dalam negeri atau luar negeri, lalu beri alasan spesifik (misalnya keanekaragaman alam, kebersihan, arsitektur). Hindari kata-kata yang tidak jelas dan ucapkan nama negara dengan benar. Gunakan satu kalimat topik dan satu kalimat pendukung.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and architecture. For instance, I find Canada appealing for its vast forests and clear lakes, which are different from the coastal scenes in my country.

× Uh yes, I do because uh, I like a lot of fuse in my country because in Lombok so many, so many, a lot of uh, fields are I I like.

✓ Uh yes, I do because I like many views in my country, especially in Lombok, where there are many fields that I like.

The sentence has unclear and incorrect pronoun and noun usage. 'I like a lot of fuse' is incorrect; 'fuse' is wrong word choice and 'a lot of' should modify a plural noun 'views'. The clause 'fields are I I like' misorders pronoun and verb. Correct structure: subject + verb + object. Use 'many views' (plural) and a relative clause 'that I like' to describe the fields. Also remove filler repetitions for clarity.

× Uh, maybe I, I don't like views in my Hampton, uh, because, uh, a lot of place in my Hampton Soldier tea.

✓ Maybe I don't like the views in my hometown because there are many places in my hometown that I don't find interesting.

The original sentence has several structure problems and unclear words ('Hampton', 'Soldier tea'). 'a lot of place' should be 'a lot of places' (plural) and requires a verb 'there are'. The sentence needs a clear main clause and a clear reason clause. Using 'my hometown' is likely the intended meaning; include a relative clause 'that I don't find interesting' to complete the thought.

× Uh, actually few views in my Hampton so good, but I, I don't like this. I I like Spears in Canada, maybe.

✓ Actually, there are few good views in my hometown, so I don't like it. I prefer the scenery in Canada, maybe.

This sentence misuses pronouns and word forms. 'few views in my Hampton so good' needs an existential 'there are' and 'few' should be followed by a noun and an adjective order: 'few good views'. 'I don't like this' is vague; 'it' refers to the views. 'I like Spears' likely intends 'I like the scenery' or 'I prefer the scenery'. Use 'prefer the scenery in Canada' for clarity. Maintain consistent subject-verb structure and correct pronoun references.