Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is natural and shows enthusiasm, but it contains some grammar errors and slightly wordy phrasing. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and correct small mistakes: use 'in my camera' → 'with my camera', 'later life' → 'later', and avoid redundant phrases like 'when I see the nice view around me'. Add a clear topic sentence then one supporting detail with a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of interesting views. For example, I often take pictures with my camera when I travel, because looking at them later brings back happy memories.

Sugerencia: Your preference is clear, but grammar and coherence need improvement. Correct verb forms and plurals: 'prefer to take' or 'prefer viewing', 'different views', 'noisy places'. Use a linking word to compare (e.g., 'whereas' or 'while') and give one specific example. Keep it concise and avoid repetition ('calm and peaceful' is repetitive).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and full of natural features like forests and mountains. Whereas urban areas tend to be noisy and crowded, so I enjoy visiting the countryside for relaxation.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys pride in your country, but it is repetitive and has some awkward phrasing. Replace informal phrases ('I love to', 'just another level') with clearer expressions, correct articles ('in Kamloops' not 'the Kamloops'), and combine sentences to avoid redundancy. Provide one specific detail and a linking phrase explaining why you prefer local views.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes here are beautiful. For instance, where I live in Kamloops I can see mountains from my window, which is very calming and makes me appreciate my hometown.

× Actually I prefer to taking to viewing the views in rural areas because those areas are very calm and very peaceful.

✓ Actually I prefer viewing the views in rural areas because those areas are very calm and peaceful.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by either the gerund (verb+ing) or the infinitive without 'to' when used as 'prefer to do' or 'prefer doing'. The original 'prefer to taking to viewing' is incorrect and has extra prepositions. Use 'prefer viewing' or 'prefer to view'. Remove duplicated words and extra 'to'.

× From there you can get a different views like trees, forests or mountains.

✓ From there you can get different views like trees, forests, or mountains.

The adjective 'different' should agree with the plural noun 'views'; 'a different views' mixes singular article with plural noun. Remove 'a' and keep 'different views'. Also add a comma before the final item in the list for clarity (optional).

× But if we talk about the urban areas, it's only a noisy places.

✓ But if we talk about urban areas, they're just noisy places.

'Urban areas' is a general plural noun and does not need 'the'. 'It's only a noisy places' mixes singular contraction 'it's' with plural 'places'; use 'they're' (they are) and 'just' instead of 'only' for natural phrasing. Also 'a noisy places' is ungrammatical: 'a' cannot modify plural 'places'.

× I would love to go rural.

✓ I would love to go to the countryside.

The phrase 'go rural' is unnatural in English. Use 'go to the countryside' or 'go to rural areas'. Also 'go' is normally followed by a preposition when indicating a type of place ('to'). This keeps the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× Actually, I love to. I love the views in my own country because this country is so beautiful.

✓ Actually, I do. I love the views in my own country because my country is so beautiful.

'I love to' is incomplete; 'I do' is the correct short answer to 'Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?'. Also 'this country' is ambiguous; use 'my country' to clearly refer to the speaker's country in relation to 'my own country'.

× Like where I'm living right now, it's in the Kamloops and the views from my windows are just another level.

✓ For example, where I'm living right now is Kamloops, and the views from my windows are on another level.

The clause 'Like where I'm living right now, it's in the Kamloops' is ungrammatical: 'Like' is informal and unnecessary, 'the Kamloops' wrongly uses the definite article; place names normally do not take 'the' unless part of the name. Rephrase to 'where I'm living right now is Kamloops'. 'On another level' is the idiomatic expression, not 'another level' alone in this context.

× They are awesome. We can see the mountains or the roads over there, which is very calming and attracts me towards it.

✓ They are awesome. We can see the mountains and the roads over there, which are very calming and attract me.

Relative clause refers to plural 'mountains and roads', so verbs must be plural: use 'are' and 'attract'. Also 'attracts me towards it' mixes singular pronoun 'it' with plural antecedents; simplify to 'attract me'. Using 'and' instead of 'or' is more natural when listing visible features.