Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise and provide a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Avoid repeated words and use correct verb forms and articles. For example, say you enjoy photography, what kinds of views you prefer, and briefly why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets, trees and animals because natural scenes help me relax and practice my composition skills.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct grammar (articles, verb forms), and add a reason using a linking word. Mention a specific feature of urban areas and an example of how you photograph there.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban areas because I like the variety of architecture and street life. For instance, I often take photos of colorful buildings and cafes with friends, then post them on Instagram to share our outings.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, use correct sentence structure and give a specific reason with a linking word. Replace vague phrases like “every facilities” with concrete examples (transport, services, safety).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has convenient transport and familiar services. For example, I can easily reach scenic spots by train and use clear information boards, which makes photographing and travelling less stressful.

× Yes I like it take a pictures like like different views like sun, trees, dogs.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, such as the sun, trees, and dogs.

Errors: incorrect verb form and structure ('like it take a pictures' should be 'like taking pictures'); article and plural misuse ('a pictures' incorrect); unnecessary repeated words ('like like'); wrong preposition/phrase ('of' for views and 'such as' for examples). Suggestion: Use the gerund 'taking' after 'like', use plural 'pictures' without 'a', use 'of' to link pictures to views, and use 'such as' or commas to list examples. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Yes I like a urban areas and click a photos with my friend and upload photo on Instagram and send Snapchat.

✓ Yes, I like urban areas; I take photos with my friend and upload them to Instagram and send them on Snapchat.

Errors: incorrect article with plural noun ('a urban areas' should be 'urban areas' without 'a'); verb choice and form ('click a photos' should be 'take photos'); article and plural mismatch ('a photos' and 'upload photo' need plural or pronoun); incorrect prepositions ('upload them to Instagram' and 'send them on Snapchat'). Suggestion: Remove incorrect indefinite article before plural nouns, use 'take photos', keep number agreement and use correct prepositions 'to' for platforms and 'on' for Snapchat. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I prefer my own country because there are many facilities my own country like transport, every facilities in my home country.

✓ I prefer my own country because there are many facilities here, such as transport and other services.

Errors: repeated phrase ('my own country' and 'in my home country'), missing preposition or connector before examples, plural and article issues ('every facilities' incorrect; 'every' requires singular noun). Suggestion: Avoid repetition, use 'here' or 'in my country', use 'such as' to introduce examples, and use correct quantifier like 'many' or 'various' with plural nouns or 'every' with singular nouns (e.g., 'every facility'). Grammar problem type ID: 22