Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify your main idea with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting reasons with linking words. Focus on natural phrasing (e.g., “I’m a photography enthusiast” or “I like taking photos to remember moments”).

Ejemplo: I’m a photography enthusiast and I enjoy taking pictures of different views to preserve memories. For example, I often photograph landscapes and candid moments with friends and family, because photos help me remember trips and special occasions.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, grammatical topic sentence that answers the choice, then add a specific reason using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and provide one concrete example to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I find nature more relaxing and refreshing. For instance, after living in busy cities for years, I enjoy visiting quiet countryside where I can photograph fields and rivers without noise and crowds.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear, concise statement about your preference (or balanced view). Use linking words to compare and give specific reasons or examples. Correct repetition and finish your sentence logically.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad, but I especially like seeing new places when I travel. For example, foreign cities offer different architectures and cultures, while in Japan I appreciate the clean streets and harmonious cityscapes that are great subjects for photos.

× I'm a a picture person definitely.

✓ I'm definitely a picture person.

The sentence has a duplicated article 'a a' and awkward word order. Move 'definitely' before the noun phrase and remove the extra 'a' to produce a natural English expression.

× I love her to remember the memories with my friends or parents and partners.

✓ I love to remember memories with my friends, parents, and partners.

'Her' is the wrong pronoun here; it should be omitted. Also 'remember the memories' is redundant: use 'remember memories' or better 'remember good times'. Use commas to separate items in a list.

× So I I always take my camera with me, with myself and.

✓ So I always take my camera with me.

The sentence contains repetition ('I I') and an unnecessary reflexive phrase ('with myself and'). Remove the duplicate and the redundant phrase to make the sentence grammatical and concise.

× I like both but now I prefer every lower areas I have lived in like cities so.

✓ I like both, but now I prefer the urban areas where I have lived, like cities.

The original uses 'every lower areas' which is ungrammatical. The intended contrast is likely 'urban areas' (cities). Use 'the urban areas where I have lived' to be clear. Add commas for readability.

× I don't get used.

✓ I haven't gotten used to them.

'I don't get used' is incomplete. The correct expression is 'get used to' plus an object. In American English 'haven't gotten used to them' indicates ongoing lack of adaptation; in British English 'haven't got used to them' is acceptable.

× I'm looking forward to see new views in foreign countries,

✓ I'm looking forward to seeing new views in foreign countries,

After 'looking forward to' the verb should be in the -ing form ('seeing'), not the base form 'see'.

× but also in Japan I really like to see the views because in Japan the city is very clean and beautiful and so I wanna I wanna make.

✓ but also in Japan I really like seeing the views because cities in Japan are very clean and beautiful, and I want to take pictures.

Use 'seeing' after 'like' for general preference. 'The city is' is vague; use 'cities in Japan are' for general statement. 'wanna I wanna make' is fragmented and unclear; replace with 'I want to take pictures' to convey the likely intent.