Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "views" not "youths") and use natural phrases: "I enjoy taking pictures of landscapes and natural scenery."

Ejemplo: I enjoy taking pictures of landscapes and natural scenery because being close to nature relaxes me. For example, I like photographing coastal sunsets and mountain trails when I go hiking, which helps me feel refreshed and creates lasting memories.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, avoid repetition and filler sounds. Use a topic sentence and one specific reason with a linking word. Use correct words ("nature" not "abuse") and give a clear example of what you enjoy seeing.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy peaceful natural landscapes and fresh air. For example, I like walking along country paths to photograph fields and forests, where I can capture quiet scenes of trees and streams.

Sugerencia: Be clear and structured: state preference, give a reason, and add a specific example. Reduce hesitations and improve vocabulary ("industrial areas" not "industrial buildings"; "natural scenery" instead of "nature things").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries, especially Australia, because it has more natural scenery than my home city. For example, in Australia I can photograph wide beaches and national parks, while my hometown has many industrial areas that limit good landscape photography.

× I'd like taking pictures of different youths.

✓ I'd like taking pictures of different views.

The student used 'like' followed by a gerund incorrectly here and also used 'youths' instead of 'views'. After 'I'd like' the correct form is usually 'to' + verb (infinitive) or 'like' + gerund for general likes. Correct options: 'I'd like to take pictures' or 'I like taking pictures'. In context 'different views' matches question about views, so replace 'youths' with 'views'. Suggestion: say 'I'd like to take pictures of different views.'

× I'm quite like the landscape.

✓ I quite like the landscape.

The student inserted an auxiliary 'am' that is unnecessary with 'like'. The correct structure is subject + quite + like + object. Also 'landscape' is fine singular or plural depending on meaning; 'the landscape' is acceptable. Suggestion: remove 'am' and say 'I quite like the landscape.'

× I'm interested in the nature and the beauty from the nature makes me really relaxed and refreshed.

✓ I'm interested in nature, and the beauty of nature makes me really relaxed and refreshed.

We do not normally use 'the' with 'nature' when speaking generally; use 'nature' without article. Use 'the beauty of nature' rather than 'the beauty from the nature'. Also the original sentence lacked proper coordination; add a comma and conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: 'I'm interested in nature, and the beauty of nature makes me really relaxed and refreshed.'

× So I like taking pictures of the nature of different views.

✓ So I like taking pictures of different views in nature.

Again, 'the nature of different views' is awkward. Use 'in nature' or 'of nature' and place modifiers correctly: 'pictures of different views in nature' or 'pictures of different natural views.' Suggestion: 'So I like taking pictures of different views in nature.'

× I prefer views in rural areas like I mentioned above, I'm I prefer abuse in natures.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas. Like I mentioned above, I prefer being in nature.

The original contains many issues: repeated 'I prefer', wrong word 'abuse' instead of 'being' or 'being out', and 'natures' (incorrect plural). Break into two sentences for clarity. Use 'being in nature' or 'natural areas' instead of 'abuse in natures.' Suggestion: 'I prefer views in rural areas. Like I mentioned above, I prefer being in nature.'

× So I'd like go to a rural area to walk around to see the uh, her to see the big and uh, to see I, I don't know, it's just uh.

✓ So I'd like to go to a rural area to walk around and see the scenery.

After 'I'd like' use the infinitive 'to go'. The original is fragmented and contains filler words. Use a concise infinitive phrase 'to walk around and see the scenery' to express purpose. Suggestion: 'So I'd like to go to a rural area to walk around and see the scenery.'

× Uh, to be honest, I, I hope I can say I like views in my home country, but the reality is that I prefer views in Australia because in my Hong Kong, in my home country, there are, uh, where lots of, uh, industrial buildings and in Australia I can see more nature things.

✓ To be honest, I would like to say I like views in my home country, but the reality is that I prefer views in Australia because in Hong Kong there are many industrial buildings, and in Australia I can see more natural scenery.

Use 'would like to say' or 'want to say' rather than 'hope I can say'. Remove repeated filler words and incorrect 'where lots of'. Use 'there are many industrial buildings' for general statements; 'Hong Kong' does not need 'my' before it when already referenced. 'Nature things' is informal; use 'natural scenery' or 'nature'. Suggestion: 'To be honest, I would like to say I like views in my home country, but the reality is that I prefer views in Australia because in Hong Kong there are many industrial buildings, and in Australia I can see more natural scenery.'