Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct language, be concise, and provide one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid contradictory phrases (e.g. 'not running into photography') and fix the final sentence which is unclear. Keep answers to a maximum of 4–5 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I'm not very into photography because I prefer to enjoy moments without interrupting them. Also, I'm not confident in my photo-taking skills, so I often don't get good results. For these reasons, I usually just soak up the view rather than try to capture it.

Sugerencia: Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g. 'views' not 'viewers', 'My company is located' and remove repeated words). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy (don't repeat 'enjoy').

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are calmer and greener than the city. For example, on weekends I go to the countryside to relax, walk in fields, and enjoy quiet landscapes that help me recharge.

Sugerencia: Fix unclear phrasing and remove repetition. Make the contrast clear and natural: mention specific examples and give a concise reason for preference. Avoid confusing wording like 'China abroad is much more expensive' — say 'travel abroad is more expensive' or 'other countries are less convenient'.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers many different landscapes, from mountains and deserts to beaches. Moreover, traveling abroad can be more expensive and less convenient, so I usually explore domestic destinations first.

× To be honest, I'm not running into photography.

✓ To be honest, I'm not into photography.

The phrase 'running into' is incorrect here. The correct expression is 'to be into' meaning 'to enjoy' or 'to have an interest in.' Remove the progressive verb 'running' and use the adjective phrase 'into photography.' Use: 'I'm not into photography.'

× I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than stop to take photos.

✓ I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than stop to take photos.

No grammatical correction required under the provided list; sentence is acceptable. If desired, you can make it smoother: 'I prefer enjoying the moment rather than stopping to take photos.' That would involve changing infinitive to gerund for parallel structure.

× Besides, I'm not really good at taking pictures, so my photos really turn out well.

✓ Besides, I'm not really good at taking pictures, so my photos don't turn out well.

The original uses positive 'turn out well' contradicting 'not really good.' Use negative 'don't turn out well' to match meaning. This is a pronoun/verb-choice consistency issue; it affects sentence sense rather than grammar type lists but fits correction requirements.

× I prefer viewers in rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas.

The student used 'viewers' (people who view) instead of 'views' (scenery). This is a word choice error related to noun form. Replace with 'views' to match meaning.

× My locate My company is located in the city, so I spend most of the week surrounded by urban scenery.

✓ My company is located in the city, so I spend most of the week surrounded by urban scenery.

The phrase 'My locate' is a fragment likely produced accidentally. Remove the extraneous words so the sentence starts correctly with 'My company is located...'. This fixes sentence structure and redundancy.

× At the weekends I like to go to the countryside to enjoy to relax and enjoy green peaceful landscapes.

✓ At the weekends I like to go to the countryside to relax and enjoy green, peaceful landscapes.

The phrase 'to enjoy to relax and enjoy' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use the infinitive 'to relax' and then 'and enjoy' (base verb) or use gerunds consistently: 'to relax and enjoy' or 'relaxing and enjoying.' Also add a comma between 'green' and 'peaceful' for correct adjective separation.

× Well, I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide range of landscapes and places to visit from mountains to deserts to beaches.

✓ Well, I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide range of landscapes and places to visit, from mountains and deserts to beaches.

The original is understandable but the list 'from mountains to deserts to beaches' is awkward. Use 'from mountains and deserts to beaches' or 'from mountains to deserts to beaches' with commas. Adding a comma before 'from' improves clarity and using 'and' gives smoother coordination.

× Besides, China abroad is much more expensive and and not so convenient.

✓ Besides, traveling abroad from China is much more expensive and not so convenient.

The phrase 'China abroad' is incorrect. Use 'traveling abroad from China' or 'going abroad' to express leaving China. Also remove the duplicated 'and.' This fixes the preposition and phrasing error and clarifies the meaning.