Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (“uh”) and incorrect noun forms. Also correct subject agreement and clarify why you like those views (emotion or purpose).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take photos of mountains at sunrise and colorful sunsets because the light creates dramatic contrasts, and I like sharing these images with my family and friends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support it with 2 specific, well-linked reasons. Use correct vocabulary (countryside, wildlife, rivers) and avoid too many hesitations. Organize details logically (flora, fauna, water features).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer more natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing countryside landscapes with trees and rivers, and I also like capturing local wildlife such as songbirds and farm animals because they add life and context to the scenes.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct phrasing (prefer views in my own country). Give 2 specific examples of diversity and explain why that matters, using linking words. Remove fillers and improve sentence cohesion.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it is very diverse from north to south. For example, in the north you can see snowy mountain landscapes, while in other regions there are wildlife sanctuaries and vibrant cultural festivals, which makes photographing there more varied and interesting.

× Yes, I do like uh, pictures of different views because different views like uh, mountains, sunrise, sunset and most of my family member and friends.

✓ Yes, I do like pictures of different views because different views include mountains, sunrises, sunsets and most of my family members and friends.

The original uses 'sunrise, sunset' (singular) inconsistently when listing general types; plural forms 'sunrises, sunsets' are appropriate. Also 'family member' should be plural 'family members' to match 'most of'. Use 'include' rather than 'like' for listing items. Suggestion: make lists consistent in number and use 'include' or 'such as' to introduce examples.

× I do prefer views in rural areas, uh, most of like countrysides, uh, the scenic views like, uh, trees, uh, Vegas type of birds, then, uh, animals, most of the domestic ones and uh, the jewvers and going rivers, wells.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas, such as countryside scenery with trees, local birds, domestic animals, rivers and wells.

Errors: 'in rural areas' is fine but 'most of like countrysides' is ungrammatical; 'countryside' is uncountable and should be singular or use 'rural areas' plural. 'Vegas type of birds' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'local birds' is better. 'Jewvers' is not an English word; probably 'jivers' or 'givers' unclear; removed. 'Going rivers' should be 'rivers'. Also unnecessary filler 'I do prefer' -> 'I prefer'. Suggestion: remove fillers, use 'such as' to introduce examples, use correct nouns and pluralization.

× I do prefer using my own country because it is a very unique from north to South.

✓ I prefer my own country because it is very diverse from north to south.

'using my own country' is incorrect; prefer is followed by noun or noun phrase: 'prefer my own country'. 'a very unique' is wrong because 'unique' is an absolute adjective and should not take 'very' or an article 'a'. Also 'from north to South' should be lowercase 'south' and 'from north to south' or 'from the north to the south'. Suggestion: use 'diverse' to express variety and correct article/adjective usage.

× Uh, there are scenes like uh, natural snow, then the wildlife sanctuaries and a lot more things with a different culture.

✓ There are scenes such as natural snowfall, wildlife sanctuaries and many other things related to different cultures.

'Scenes like' can be improved to 'scenes such as'. 'Natural snow' is better expressed as 'natural snowfall' or 'snow-covered landscapes'. 'A lot more things with a different culture' is vague and ungrammatical; use 'many other things related to different cultures'. Suggestion: choose precise nouns and use 'related to' for connection.