Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and coherent but slightly wordy and has minor phrasing issues (e.g., 'sceneries', 'retrieve all those beautiful moments'). Keep sentences natural and concise, use precise vocabulary, and avoid repetition. Add a brief specific example to enrich the response. Also limit to 3–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, I often photograph sunrise scenes at the beach, which remind me of peaceful vacations. This way I can revisit those moments when I look at the photos.

Sugerencia: The main idea is clear but there are pronunciation/filler issues (‘umm’), a word choice error (‘tranquiline’ is incorrect) and a slightly awkward structure. Use a clear topic sentence, replace incorrect words with accurate vocabulary (e.g., ‘tranquility’), remove fillers, and add one specific detail explaining why rural views appeal to you, with a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so').

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I love being close to nature and quiet landscapes. For instance, walking through a village at dawn helps me relax and think clearly, so I find countryside scenes more calming than busy city views.

Sugerencia: Good content and clear opinion, but watch small fluency issues (filler 'uh', 'the same times' incorrect). Combine ideas into a single smooth answer and give one brief supporting example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'also' correctly and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both—China has diverse landscapes worth exploring, such as deserts and mountains; however, I’m also attracted to scenery abroad, for example the fjords in Norway, because they offer very different light and atmosphere.

× I really enjoy taking pictures of different sceneries because I think it is a great way to record all the memories and later I can retrieve all those beautiful moments from my life.

✓ I really enjoy taking pictures of different scenes because I think it is a great way to record memories, and later I can retrieve those beautiful moments from my life.

The noun 'sceneries' is unidiomatic in English; the correct plural is 'scenes' or 'scenery' (uncountable). Also 'all the memories' is wordy; 'memories' or 'those memories' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'scenes' for countable distinct views and simplify redundant words.

× I enjoy countryside views because I like nature and those rustic landscapes could really calm me down and, umm, help me to focus on what's beautiful and what's the tranquiline.

✓ I enjoy countryside views because I like nature, and those rustic landscapes really calm me down and help me focus on what is beautiful and the tranquility.

Using 'could really calm me down' and 'help me to focus' is inconsistent with the present habitual tense of 'I enjoy' and 'I like'. Use simple present 'calm' and 'help me focus'. The word 'tranquiline' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'tranquility'. Also remove filler 'umm' and unnecessary 'to' after 'help'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent and use correct vocabulary.

× I actually enjoy both because China is huge and there are a variety of landscapes you can explore.

✓ I actually enjoy both because China is huge and there are a variety of landscapes to explore.

The clause 'there are a variety of landscapes you can explore' is grammatically acceptable but wordier; using the infinitive 'to explore' is more natural when speaking generally. Maintain present simple tone. Also note slight article preference: 'a variety of landscapes' is fine.

× And the same times I'm also drawn by, uh, views from other countries such as Switzerland or Norway.

✓ At the same time, I'm also drawn to views from other countries such as Switzerland and Norway.

The phrase 'the same times' is incorrect; use 'at the same time'. Preposition 'drawn by' is less natural here than 'drawn to'. Replace 'uh' filler and change 'or' to 'and' for examples. Suggestion: use correct time expression and typical collocation 'drawn to'.