Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but has some grammar mistakes, slight redundancy and a small pronunciation/word-form error (‘I've did view before’). Make the response more concise: use one strong topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details linked with connectors. Correct verb forms and avoid repetition (e.g., ‘accessible’ used twice).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because my smartphone is always with me, so I can capture scenes instantly. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines, then review them later to remember the atmosphere and lighting.

Sugerencia: Good idea and direct response, but the answer includes hesitations and repetition (’would definitely’, ‘rural areas’ repeated), filler words, and some awkward phrasing. Improve coherence by giving one clear reason followed by a specific example; use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘for example’. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repeating the same phrase.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I rarely get to visit the countryside and I find the natural landscapes refreshing. For example, I imagine walking through green fields and photographing small villages, which would be a nice change from my daily urban routine.

Sugerencia: You answered directly and showed thoughtful reasoning, but responses are slightly wordy and include repetition (‘own country’ repeated) and vague phrasing. Make the answer more concise: state your preference, give a clear reason, and add a short plan or example. Use linking words such as ‘because’ and ‘for now’ to show sequence.

Ejemplo: For now, I prefer to explore views in my own country, Pakistan, because I haven't seen much of it yet. I would like to travel within Pakistan first — for example, visiting northern valleys and coastal areas — and then compare those views with scenery abroad.

× I really enjoy looking back at these pictures and seeing the scenery that I've did view before.

✓ I really enjoy looking back at these pictures and seeing the scenery that I've seen before.

The sentence uses the auxiliary 'I've' (I have) which requires a past participle, not the simple past form 'did view'. 'Did view' is incorrect after 'have'. Use the past participle 'seen'. Suggestion: use 'I've seen' or 'I saw' depending on emphasis.

× Since I live in an in an urban area, I would definitely say I would like to see rural areas more and that is because I didn't really get to see or explore different RE rural areas.

✓ Since I live in an urban area, I would definitely say I would like to see rural areas more because I didn't really get to see or explore different rural areas.

There is a repeated preposition/phrase 'in an in an' which is a typing/repetition error; remove the duplicate. Also 'that is because' is wordy; 'because' suffices. 'RE' appears as an extraneous token. Suggestions: remove duplicated words and extraneous tokens and keep one clear preposition 'in an urban area'.

× So I would definitely enjoy the rural areas more than my urban areas which is my daily routine to be honest.

✓ So I would definitely enjoy the rural areas more than the urban area where I live and which is my daily routine, to be honest.

The original compares 'rural areas' with 'my urban areas' and then uses 'which is' that doesn't clearly refer to the plural 'areas'. Change to singular 'the urban area where I live' to match 'daily routine' and ensure the relative clause refers clearly. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: make subject and pronoun references consistent and clear.

× I can't really say anything about my own country.

✓ I can't really say much about my own country.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but 'say anything' is less natural here; 'say much' fits better with 'can't'. The present tense 'can't' is correct for current inability. Suggestion: use 'say much' for naturalness.

× I haven't traveled a lot in my own country.

✓ I haven't travelled a lot in my own country.

Both 'traveled' and 'travelled' are correct (American vs British spelling). No tense error; it's present perfect to describe life experience, which is correct. Suggestion: choose consistent spelling style; keep present perfect 'haven't travelled' to show experience up to now.

× So I'll definitely say that I would first love to explore my own country, Pakistan, and see if I really love the views here, to actually be able to hold an opinion about what I think about the other countries and compare it to my own country.

✓ So I'll definitely say that I would first love to explore my own country, Pakistan, and see if I really like the views here, so I can form an opinion and compare them to those in other countries.

The original mixes modal verbs and uses 'love' and 'be able to hold an opinion' which is wordy and awkward. 'See if I really like the views' is more natural than 'love' in this exploratory context. Use 'so I can form an opinion' instead of 'to actually be able to hold an opinion'. Also 'compare them to those in other countries' clarifies the comparison object. Suggestion: simplify phrasing, maintain future intention with 'I'll' and 'would' appropriately.