Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh câu vô nghĩa và lỗi ngữ pháp; cấu trúc câu nên ngắn gọn, đi thẳng vào ý chính (topic sentence) rồi bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc và sửa lỗi phát âm/nhầm từ (ví dụ "brothers version of a view" là không phù hợp). Giữ độ dài tối đa 3–5 câu tự nhiên và tránh lặp từ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like landscapes such as mountains and the ocean because they change with the light and weather, which makes each picture unique. For example, I once took sunrise photos on a beach that showed vibrant colors and reflections.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ lý do với từ ngữ phù hợp; tránh dùng từ không chính xác (ví dụ "cypher", "beef beef"). Sử dụng liên từ (because, however, while) để so sánh hai lựa chọn, cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về điều bạn thích ở khu vực đô thị hoặc nông thôn. Giữ cấu trúc: topic sentence + 1–2 câu hỗ trợ.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the modern architecture and lively streets. For instance, I like photographing city skylines at night when the lights create interesting patterns. However, I also appreciate rural scenery for its peacefulness and natural colors.

Sugerencia: Ý kiến rõ ràng nhưng cần dùng từ chính xác và diễn đạt mạch lạc hơn; tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ "spirit of our shoulders that sacrifice" không đúng). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể (thiên nhiên, văn hoá, lịch sử) và kết luận ngắn. Dùng liên từ để logic hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in Vietnam because they combine beautiful natural landscapes with a rich cultural history. For example, the terraced rice fields and historic towns reflect both nature and people’s traditions, which makes the scenery very meaningful to me. That's why I think Vietnam offers the best views.

× I really love taking photos with various views such as mountain, ocean or just in my bedroom.

✓ I really love taking photos of various views such as a mountain, the ocean, or even my bedroom.

Mistakes: missing articles with singular countable nouns and inconsistent preposition. Use 'a' before 'mountain' (singular, countable), 'the ocean' is more natural, and 'photos of' is standard. Suggestion: add appropriate articles and use 'of' for photographing views.

× I think it's because I am the kind of person that's really like the brothers version of a view.

✓ I think it's because I am the kind of person who really appreciates different kinds of views.

Original is ungrammatical and confusing. 'That's really like the brothers version of a view' is unclear and incorrectly uses 'that' and 'like'. Use 'who' for people and a clear verb phrase 'appreciates different kinds of views'. Suggestion: replace unclear metaphor with a direct statement about liking views.

× Therefore I I think it's very.

✓ Therefore, I think that very much.

Sentence is incomplete and has a duplication 'I I'. 'Very' needs to modify something; 'very much' completes the thought. Suggestion: remove duplicate word and add 'much' to complete the expression.

× Well, I think I referred view in urban area because in urban area you can have the modern view and it's look really like cypher for me.

✓ Well, I think I prefer views in urban areas because in an urban area you can have modern scenery and it looks really special to me.

Errors: 'referred' is incorrect verb (should be 'prefer'), 'view' needs plural or article, 'urban area' should be plural or preceded by 'an', 'it's look' wrong verb form. 'cypher' is likely wrong word; replaced with 'special'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'prefer', match singular/plural, and use 'looks' for third person singular.

× On the other hand, rural area just only have trees and some beef beef.

✓ On the other hand, rural areas only have trees and some cattle.

Problems: 'rural area' should be plural to contrast with 'urban areas'; 'have' should agree with plural subject; 'just only' is redundant and 'beef beef' is incorrect phrasing—use 'cattle' or 'livestock'. Suggestion: use plural nouns and correct vocabulary.

× Well, actually I think view in Vietnam is the best view in the world.

✓ Well, actually I think the views in Vietnam are the best in the world.

Use definite article 'the' with 'views in Vietnam' and make subject plural 'views' with plural verb 'are' to match general statement. Suggestion: use 'the' and plural form when speaking about a country's views collectively.

× It's just not only just about natural, but also the spirit of our shoulders that sacrifice in during the world for us to have be today.

✓ It's not just about natural beauty, but also about the spirit of our ancestors who sacrificed during the war so we could be where we are today.

Original has redundancy 'not only just', wrong vocabulary 'shoulders' instead of 'ancestors', incorrect prepositions 'in during the world', and malformed clause 'for us to have be today'. Correction clarifies meaning: 'natural beauty', 'ancestors', 'sacrificed during the war', and proper result clause 'so we could be where we are today'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns, prepositions, and construct clear cause-and-effect clauses.

× Therefore I think the view in Vietnam is the best one.

✓ Therefore, I think the views in Vietnam are the best.

As before, use plural 'views' and plural verb 'are' when making a general comparison. 'The best one' is awkward when referring to multiple views. Suggestion: make subject and verb agree in number and avoid singular 'one' for a collective claim.