Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Giảm tiếng ngập ngừng và sửa ngữ pháp; bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể có liên kết logic. Ví dụ: tránh dùng nhiều "umm/uh"; dùng thì đúng (I usually take pictures); mở rộng lý do bằng ví dụ cụ thể (e.g., at the beach, in cafés) và dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "for example" để liên kết.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memories with friends. For example, I often take photos when we go to the beach or when we bake together at home, as these moments are relaxed and photogenic.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi cấu trúc; dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn và một liên kết để so sánh. Thay vì lặp "in rural area" nhiều lần, dùng đại từ hoặc cụm từ thay thế; sửa mạo từ (the countryside / rural areas). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ lý do (e.g., quiet fields, fresh air).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because the countryside is peaceful and less crowded. For instance, I enjoy quiet fields and fresh air there, whereas urban areas are noisy and hectic.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trình bày ý chính rõ ràng và tổ chức câu với liên từ để so sánh; sửa ngữ pháp (I prefer the views in my own country; they're peaceful and simple; in other countries they are more modern and offer more to explore). Giảm ngập ngừng và thêm ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: historical sites, modern architecture).

Ejemplo: I generally prefer the views in my own country because they're peaceful and simple, offering familiar landscapes. However, I also enjoy views abroad since they are often more modern and full of attractions, such as unique architecture and historical sites I can explore.

× I usually taking picture when I have a time with my friends like umm go hang out or maybe baking a cake yes.

✓ I usually take pictures when I have time with my friends, like when we go hang out or maybe bake a cake.

Student used 'taking' (present participle) where simple present 'take' is required for habitual actions. Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' for general usage, and 'have a time' should be 'have time'. Use base form 'go' should be 'go and hang out' or 'go hang out' and parallel verb form 'bake' not 'baking'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines, make nouns plural when general, and keep parallel verb forms.

× I usually taking picture when I have a time with my friends like umm go hang out or maybe baking a cake yes.

✓ I usually take pictures when I have time with my friends, like when we go hang out or maybe bake a cake.

Errors: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when referring to taking photos in general; 'a time' is unnatural — use 'time' without an article. Suggestion: use plural nouns for countable general actions and omit unnecessary articles.

× I prefer the view in rural area because in rural area is very peaceful, whereas in a urban city I think it's very busy and not suitable for me at all.

✓ I prefer the views in rural areas because rural areas are very peaceful, whereas in an urban city I think it's very busy and not suitable for me at all.

Errors: Missing plural or article with 'rural area' — 'rural areas' or 'the rural area'. Also 'in rural area is' lacks subject-verb agreement and an article; use 'rural areas are'. 'a urban city' should be 'an urban city' because 'urban' begins with a vowel sound. Suggestion: use plural for general preference, ensure correct articles 'a' vs 'an', and match subject and verb.

× I prefer view in own country because it's very peaceful and simple umm.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because they're very peaceful and simple.

Errors: Missing article 'the' before 'view' and missing possessive 'my'. 'View' should be plural 'views' for general meaning. 'It's' refers to singular but 'views' require plural pronoun 'they're'. Suggestion: include articles/possessives and ensure pronoun agrees with noun number.

× However I also prefer the view in the other country because it very umm modern and have a lot of thing I can explore in there.

✓ However, I also prefer the views in other countries because they are very modern and have a lot of things I can explore there.

Errors: 'the other country' is awkward; use 'other countries' for generalization. 'it very modern' missing verb 'is'. 'have' must agree with plural subject 'they'. 'thing' should be plural 'things'. 'in there' is incorrect; use 'there' or 'in them'. Suggestion: use plural forms for general statements, include the verb 'are', and use correct demonstratives/pronouns.