Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy, clear topic sentences and concise supporting details. Use correct verb forms, articles, pluralization and avoid redundancy. Limit to maximum 4–5 sentences and connect ideas with simple linking words. Add one specific detail (e.g., which viewpoint) to make description more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, during a five-day trip to Hua Hin I visited beaches, a busy night market and Khao Takiab viewpoint, and I photographed the contrasts between the sea and hillside. I took photos to capture the colours and the lively atmosphere, because having images helps me remember those moments.

Sugerencia: Clarify the main idea with a stronger topic sentence and correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'skylines' not 'skylight'; plural forms; use articles). Remove vague fragments and finish thoughts. Use linking words to list reasons and give one concrete example of a city feature you like.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because city skylines and architecture look striking and energetic. For example, living in a condo in the UK I appreciate easy access to museums, varied restaurants and reliable public transport, which makes city life convenient and interesting.

Sugerencia: This answer is clear and specific; improve minor grammar and avoid exaggeration like 'hundreds' unless precise. Add a linking phrase to connect reason and example and keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new experiences and landscapes I haven't seen before. For instance, in the Maldives I photographed the vivid sunsets and turquoise beaches to remember the unique colours and light.

× I spent five days in Hua Hin and visited several scenic spots, beaches and busy night market and a hill viewpoint.

✓ I spent five days in Hua Hin and visited several scenic spots, beaches, a busy night market, and a hill viewpoint.

The phrase 'busy night market' is singular but was listed without an article, causing a singular/plural mismatch. Add the article 'a' before 'busy night market' and include commas to separate items in the list for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'a' before singular countable nouns and comma-separate list items.

× So I tried to capture the variety of landscapes and lively St. scenes.

✓ So I tried to capture the variety of landscapes and lively street scenes.

'St.' is an abbreviation that is inappropriate in informal speech and may be interpreted incorrectly. The intended form is 'street scenes' (noun phrase) so use the full word. Also 'lively street scenes' is the correct present participle/noun combination. Suggestion: Avoid unclear abbreviations; write out 'street scenes'.

× Taking photo make me happy because they're preserved memories.

✓ Taking photos makes me happy because they are preserved memories.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to match general activity, and the verb must agree with the gerund subject: 'Taking photos makes' (singular verb 'makes'). Also 'they're' expanded to 'they are' is acceptable; use 'they are preserved memories' or better 'they preserve memories.' Suggestion: Ensure plural nouns where appropriate and match verb to subject; consider rephrasing to 'they preserve memories.'

× I prefer views of cities because this skylight and architecture create a striking, lively scene and I feel comfortable in urban environments.

✓ I prefer views of cities because the skyline and architecture create a striking, lively scene, and I feel comfortable in urban environments.

'This skylight' is incorrect; the intended noun is 'skyline' (a noun meaning city skyline). 'This' is also inappropriate; use the definite article 'the' to refer generally to features of cities. Commas improve readability. Suggestion: Use 'the skyline' and appropriate articles when referring to general features.

× I live in a condo in the UK and enjoy the convenience and maintenance and cultural variety that city's life offers, such as museum, restaurants and easy.

✓ I live in a condo in the UK and enjoy the convenience, maintenance, and cultural variety that city life offers, such as museums, restaurants, and ease of access.

'city's life' incorrectly uses possessive; correct phrase is 'city life' (no apostrophe). 'museum' should be plural 'museums' to match 'restaurants', and 'easy' is incomplete—use 'ease of access' or 'ease' to express convenience. Add commas in list. Suggestion: Use 'city life' instead of 'city's life', pluralize when listing examples, and complete adjectives like 'easy' to full nouns/phrases.

× For example, I spent five days in Hua Hin and visited several scenic spots, beaches and busy night market and a hill viewpoint.

✓ For example, I spent five days in Hua Hin and visited several scenic spots, beaches, a busy night market, and a hill viewpoint.

Past tense 'spent' and 'visited' are appropriate, but sentence needed article corrections as noted earlier. Ensure past tense consistency and correct noun forms. Suggestion: Keep past tense verbs and correct noun articles and plurals.

× I prefer views in other countries because they give me a sense of new experiences and scenery I haven't seen before.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they give me a sense of new experiences and scenery that I have not seen before.

The sentence is mostly correct but adding 'that' improves clarity and 'I have not' is preferred in formal speech. Maintain present perfect 'have not seen' for experiences up to now. Suggestion: Use 'that' for clarity and expand contractions in formal contexts.

× For example, when I went to the Maldives, I took hundreds of photos because the beaches and sunsets were absolutely breathtaking.

✓ For example, when I went to the Maldives, I took hundreds of photos because the beaches and sunsets were absolutely breathtaking.

This sentence is grammatically correct; past tense 'went' and 'took' match. No correction needed. Suggestion: Keep past simple for completed past actions.