Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid fillers (e.g., "uh"). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also replace vague words like "sceneries" with "scenes" or "landscapes."

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph coastal landscapes and city skylines because they help me remember the mood of a place and improve my composition skills.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence without hesitation, remove repetition, and use linking words to contrast choices (e.g., "however," "although"). Provide one specific reason for each preference to add content and use precise adjectives (e.g., "stunning" instead of "mind blowing").

Ejemplo: I usually prefer urban views, especially at night, because city skylines are stunning and full of lights. However, when I want peace, I prefer rural landscapes because the quiet countryside helps me relax and recharge.

Sugerencia: Open with a direct answer, avoid fillers, and streamline the supporting details. Focus on two clear benefits and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "architecture" and "local culture"). Avoid over-generalizing about "the economy of their people."

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy exploring different architectural styles and local cultures. For instance, photographing historic European buildings helps me learn about the country's history and artistic traditions.

× I like photography because it is my, uh, relaxing habit and also I can remember the moments and places.

✓ I like photography because it is my relaxing habit and it also helps me remember moments and places.

Remove the unnecessary comma before 'relaxing' and add 'it' to connect clauses. Also change 'I can remember the moments and places' to 'it helps me remember moments and places' for natural English and correct sentence flow; this fixes article/word usage and sentence structure errors (Article errors and Sentence structure).

× It really depends on my mood by but I usually prefer uh urban areas and city views because at night, especially at night, uh skylines are uh looking very beautiful and mind blowing.

✓ It really depends on my mood, but I usually prefer urban areas and city views because at night skylines look very beautiful and are mind-blowing.

Remove extraneous word 'by' and filler 'uh'; add a comma before 'but' to join clauses correctly. Change 'skylines are uh looking' to 'skylines look' to use simple present for general truth and replace 'mind blowing' with hyphenated adjective 'mind-blowing'. This addresses Incorrect conjunction use, Present tense consistency, and adjective/adverb usage.

× But sometimes I need to relax and go for rural.

✓ But sometimes I need to relax and go to rural areas.

The phrase 'go for rural' is unidiomatic. Use 'go to rural areas' to indicate visiting the countryside. This fixes sentence structure and preposition usage.

× I usually prefer UH views in other countries because I can get familiar with their culture and the styles and architecture of their buildings, and at the same time learn much about their history and the economy of their people.

✓ I usually prefer views in other countries because I can become familiar with their culture and the styles and architecture of their buildings, and at the same time learn a lot about their history and economy.

Remove filler 'UH' and change 'get familiar' to 'become familiar' (more natural collocation). Replace 'learn much about' with 'learn a lot about' and 'the economy of their people' with 'their economy' to avoid wordiness and incorrect noun phrases. This addresses Incorrect use of pronouns and adjective/adverb/quantifier issues.