Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid tense and word-choice errors, and use one or two supporting details with linking words. Keep it under five sentences and correct common mistakes (e.g., 'had' → 'have', 'take every pictures' → 'take pictures of everything', 'tip the memoirs' → 'capture memories').

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually use my smartphone because it’s convenient, and I like to capture memories both in my mind and on my phone. For example, when I travel I photograph landscapes so I can remember how a place looked later.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear preference and give specific reasons using linking words. Remove filler sounds and repeated words, and correct unclear phrases ('limit amount', 'pita chop'). Provide one or two concrete examples of what you like to photograph in rural areas.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer more varied and natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields, old farmhouses and quiet country roads, which I find more interesting and peaceful than crowded city streets.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, then explain with specific reasons and an example. Avoid repetitive phrases and improve vocabulary (e.g., 'limited views' → 'less variety'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to structure your response.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer a wider variety of landscapes and cultural scenes. For example, when I visited Japan I photographed mountain temples and coastal villages that are very different from the scenery at home.

× Yes, I had a camera.

✓ Yes, I have a camera.

The student used past tense 'had' to describe possession in the present; this is an article/tense error. The correct present-tense verb 'have' should be used because they are stating a current possession. Suggestion: use 'I have' when talking about what you possess now.

× I mean, I will use my smartphone, I will take every pictures.

✓ I mean, I use my smartphone; I take pictures of everything.

The student used future 'will' incorrectly when describing habitual actions and used plural error with 'every pictures'. Habitual actions require simple present. Also 'every' should be followed by a singular noun (every picture) or use 'all pictures'/'pictures of everything'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and correct noun form: 'I take pictures of everything.'

× I like shooting and I like because I want to tip the memoirs in my mind and also in my phone, even if I can't take a good picture.

✓ I like taking photos because I want to keep memories in my mind and on my phone, even if I can't take a good picture.

Multiple issues: 'shooting' is informal but acceptable; 'I like because' is incorrect conjunction usage — you need a direct object or reason phrase after 'like' or use 'I like taking photos because...'. 'Tip the memoirs' is incorrect vocabulary; 'keep memories' is correct. Use preposition 'on my phone' not 'in my phone'. Suggestion: restructure to 'I like taking photos because I want to keep memories in my mind and on my phone.'

× Actually, I like the rural areas because the city, you know, its limit amount.

✓ Actually, I like rural areas because the city, you know, has a limited amount of variety.

The student used 'its limit amount' which is ungrammatical; correct structure requires a verb ('has') and adjective form 'limited'. This is a subject-verb and adjective form issue. Suggestion: use 'the city has a limited amount of variety' or 'cities have limited variety.'

× So I want to find some different things to take a picture and uh yeah, for those things.

✓ So I want to find different things to take pictures of.

Awkward and redundant phrasing: 'to take a picture' should be 'to take pictures of' and 'for those things' is unnecessary. Suggestion: simplify to 'I want to find different things to take pictures of.'

× I, I would say every day I, I, I, I may not like to take the pita chop with them.

✓ I would say I don't always like to take photos with them every day.

The original is highly disfluent with repetition and contains unclear phrase 'pita chop'. Assuming intent was 'take photos with them'. The correct negative form for frequency is 'don't always'. Suggestion: remove repetitions and clarify vocabulary: 'I don't always like to take photos with them every day.'

× I prefer views in other countries because my country limited views and other countries unlimited views.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because my country has limited views and other countries have unlimited views.

Missing verbs 'has' in both clauses; also adjective 'limited' needs verb. Use simple present 'has' to state general facts. Suggestion: include the verb 'has' in both parts: 'my country has limited views...' and 'other countries have unlimited views.'

× There are different countries so have different types of views.

✓ Different countries have different types of views.

The phrase 'There are different countries so have...' is ungrammatical; subject should be 'different countries' with verb 'have'. Suggestion: use concise subject-verb order: 'Different countries have different types of views.'

× But in my country maybe it is it is limited so I prefer views in other countries.

✓ But in my country, it is limited, so I prefer views in other countries.

Repetition 'it is it is' is a disfluency; comma needed for clarity. Use simple present 'is limited' to state general condition. Suggestion: remove duplicate words and add commas: 'But in my country, it is limited, so I prefer views in other countries.'