Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and add clearer supporting detail. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb tenses and articles, limit to up to five sentences, and use a linking word before your example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views because it helps me discover new perspectives on a place's beauty. For example, taking a photo from the side rather than the front can highlight architectural details and change the mood of the scene.

Sugerencia: Correct vocabulary and grammar, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect ideas. Use precise nouns and adjectives (e.g., skyscrapers, bustling streets), fix subject-verb agreement, and give one compact example sentence.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because towering skyscrapers and bustling streets energize me. For example, watching city lights and people moving at night creates a lively atmosphere that I find exciting.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, word choice and clarity. Use a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g., 'vibes' not 'wipes'), include a brief reason and one specific comparison, and keep it concise with linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because different cities often have more vibrant atmospheres. For example, New York City's energetic skyline and street life feel more dynamic to me than Kuala Lumpur's calmer city center.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different view because it's helped me discover new perspective on the place beauty.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because they've helped me discover new perspectives on the place's beauty.

The noun 'view' should be plural 'views' to match 'different'. 'PictureS' is plural so 'views' aligns. 'It's helped' uses singular contraction for 'it has' but refers to 'pictures' (plural), so use 'they've helped' (they have helped). 'New perspective' should be plural 'new perspectives' because multiple views provide multiple perspectives. 'the place beauty' needs a possessive or article: use 'the place's beauty' to show the beauty belonging to the place. Suggestion: ensure subject and noun number agree and use possessive form for nouns showing ownership.

× So for example taking a picture from the side and from the front is totally different.

✓ So, for example, taking a picture from the side and taking one from the front are totally different.

The original compares two actions; use parallel gerunds and ensure subject-verb agreement. 'taking a picture ... and from the front is' mixes forms and uses singular verb 'is' for a compound subject; change to 'taking a picture from the side and taking one from the front are' to maintain parallel structure and plural subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: keep items in a list parallel and match verb number to the compound subject.

× Personally, I prefer the view in the urban area because of the towering skyscrabble and the buzzing city street, which really make me feel energized.

✓ Personally, I prefer views in urban areas because of the towering skyscrapers and the buzzing city streets, which really make me feel energized.

Use plural 'views', 'urban areas' to match general preference. 'Skyscrabble' is misspelled; correct to 'skyscrapers' (plural). 'city street' should be plural 'city streets' for general description. Maintain plural nouns when speaking generally. Suggestion: use correct spelling and pluralize when referring to general features.

× So for example, I particularly enjoy watching the city streak at night and seeing people moving around.

✓ For example, I particularly enjoy watching the city streets at night and seeing people moving around.

'city streak' is incorrect word choice; should be 'city streets'. 'watching the city streets' is a general activity—no verb agreement issue here but the noun needed correction. Suggestion: choose correct nouns to match intended meaning.

× It just make me feel exciting and energized.

✓ It just makes me feel excited and energized.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' (third person singular) requires 'makes' not 'make'. Use adjective 'excited' to describe the person's feeling, not 'exciting' which describes something that causes excitement. Suggestion: match verb form to subject and use correct adjective to describe emotions.

× Personally I prefer to view in other countries, so for example New York City, the city wipes and energy just way more vibrant than the one in the capital in my country Kuala Lumpur.

✓ Personally, I prefer to view places in other countries; for example, New York City—the city's vibes and energy are simply much more vibrant than those in the capital of my country, Kuala Lumpur.

Several issues: 'prefer to view in other countries' is awkward—'prefer to view places in other countries' is clearer. 'city wipes' is a misspelling; intended 'city vibes'. Subject-verb agreement: 'the city's vibes and energy' is a compound subject requiring plural verb 'are'. 'just way more vibrant' is informal; 'simply much more vibrant' is clearer. Compare 'those in the capital' rather than 'the one' because 'vibes and energy' (plural) are compared. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: fix misspellings, ensure clear comparison targets, and match verb number to compound subjects.