Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and repetitions, start with a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences. Focus on correct verb forms and smoother phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and flowers because I like their colors and the peaceful atmosphere. Also, I usually carry my camera every day so I don't miss interesting scenes.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words, and give a specific reason with a linking word. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and concise phrasing will improve clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views to rural ones. This is because I enjoy walking around the city at night with my friends, as the lights and lively atmosphere help me relax. For instance, I like photographing illuminated buildings and busy streets when I go out.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear statement, avoid vague comparisons, and give a specific reason with an example. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'not much difference', 'enjoy views in my country') and concise language.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad yet. Although I have seen many photos of other countries, I feel more connected to local landscapes and know the best spots to photograph, such as the coastal cliffs near my town.

× To be honest, to be honest, yes, I'm a type of person who who can't, uh, cope, uh, a day without camera.

✓ To be honest, yes, I'm the type of person who can't cope a day without a camera.

Use 'the type of person' (definite article and singular noun) and 'can't cope a day without a camera' needs the article 'a' before 'camera'. Remove the repeated 'to be honest' and duplicate 'who'. Also keep verbs in base form after 'who' when referring to ability ('can't cope'). Suggestion: Say 'I'm the type of person who can't cope a day without a camera.' or 'I can't go a day without a camera.'

× I really love uh, take pictures of landscapes, of flowers, sunsets, sunrises, everything, uh, surrounding me.

✓ I really love taking pictures of landscapes, flowers, sunsets, sunrises, and everything surrounding me.

After 'love', when referring to activities generally, use the gerund (-ing) form ('taking'). Also streamline the list with commas and add 'and' before the final item. Suggestion: Use 'I love taking pictures...'.

× Of course, like uh, most of young people, I prefer cities over uh, rural areas, like villages because umm, I really like, go for a walk with my friends, uh, at night and like night City, it really help, uh, helps me relax and it satisfies me.

✓ Of course, like most young people, I prefer cities over rural areas, such as villages, because I really like going for a walk with my friends at night, and city nightlife really helps me relax and satisfies me.

Use 'most young people' (omit 'of'). After 'like' as a filler, remove extra commas. Use the gerund 'going' after 'like'. 'Night City' is incorrect; use 'city nightlife' or 'the city at night'. Subject-verb agreement: 'city nightlife' (singular) 'helps' not 'help'. Also 'satisfies me' fits better than 'it satisfies me'. Suggestion: 'I prefer cities... because I like going for walks with my friends at night; the city nightlife helps me relax.'

× To be honest, I have never been to another country but I have seen a lot of photos of another country.

✓ To be honest, I have never been to another country, but I have seen a lot of photos of other countries.

Use 'other countries' (plural) when speaking generally about countries other than one's own. Keep present perfect 'have never been' and 'have seen' consistent. Add a comma before 'but'. Suggestion: 'I have never been to another country, but I have seen many photos of other countries.'

× So I would say there is no much difference between views like in America or in my country.

✓ So I would say there is not much difference between the views in America and those in my country.

Use 'not much' instead of 'no much'. Use 'the views' to refer to specific types of views; 'in America and those in my country' clarifies comparison. Use 'and' not 'or' for comparison. Also 'those' replaces repeated 'views'. Suggestion: 'There is not much difference between the views in America and those in my country.'

× So I would prefer to enjoy using my country.

✓ So I would prefer to enjoy the views in my country.

Original phrase 'enjoy using my country' is ungrammatical. Use 'enjoy the views in my country' to match the context (preferring views). 'Prefer to enjoy' is awkward; 'I prefer to enjoy the views in my country' or simply 'I prefer the views in my country.' Suggestion: 'I prefer the views in my country.'