Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Giữ câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng ngắn gọn hơn, tránh tiếng lấp đầy như 'uh' và lặp từ. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó đưa thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh, cảm xúc khi chụp, hoặc ví dụ địa điểm). Sử dụng từ nối nếu cần để làm mạch lạc (for example, especially).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially dramatic natural landscapes like mountains and waterfalls. For example, when I visited Ha Long Bay, I spent hours capturing the sunrise because the light made the karst islands look spectacular.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích với chi tiết liên quan đến câu hỏi (tại sao rural views tốt hơn). Tránh kể quá nhiều câu chuyện không liên quan; thay vào đó nêu ví dụ cụ thể và dùng từ nối như 'because' hoặc 'for instance'. Giữ tối đa 4–5 câu và tránh tiếng lấp đầy.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel peaceful and close to nature. For instance, the countryside near my grandparents' home has rice fields and quiet lanes, which remind me of relaxing childhood afternoons. This calm atmosphere makes rural scenery more appealing to me than busy cities.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Nói rõ quan điểm ngay từ đầu, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể kèm ví dụ riêng về cảnh hoặc trải nghiệm bạn muốn khám phá. Tránh từ lạ như 'travelholic' trong thi cử; thay bằng 'I love travelling' hoặc 'I'm keen on travelling'. Dùng liên từ như 'because' và 'for example'.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I love travelling and discovering new cultures. For example, I would like to see the Swiss Alps for their dramatic mountains and the Japanese countryside for its traditional villages and seasonal scenery.

× Well, yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, uh, especially, uh, breathtaking views such as natural landscape or natural wonders around the world.

✓ Well, yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, especially breathtaking views such as natural landscapes and natural wonders around the world.

The nouns 'natural landscape' and 'natural wonders' need plural forms to match the general idea of many examples; this is a singular/plural issue (use 'landscapes'). Also use 'and' instead of repeating 'or' to list two related noun phrases more naturally. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking about types or examples in general, and use coordinating conjunctions to join related items. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× Uh, well, I prefer views in rural areas more because, uh, it gives me a sense of intimacy.

✓ Uh, well, I prefer views in rural areas because they give me a sense of intimacy.

The pronoun referring to 'views' must agree in number with its antecedent: 'views' is plural so use 'they' and 'give' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'prefer... more' is redundant; use 'prefer' alone. Suggestion: ensure pronouns match the number of the nouns they replace and avoid redundant comparative adverbs. Grammar Problem Type ID: 27

× Uh, I usually play traditional games a lot with my grandparents here, so it was one of the best memories I have ever had in my childhood.

✓ I used to play traditional games a lot with my grandparents, so it was one of the best memories of my childhood.

The sentence mixes present habitual 'I usually play' with a past context 'in my childhood'. Use 'used to' to indicate a habitual action in the past. Also 'memories I have ever had in my childhood' is awkward; say 'memories of my childhood'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent by using past forms for past events and use idiomatic prepositional phrases like 'memories of my childhood'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× Well, I prefer views in other countries apart from Vietnam because I'm a travelholic person.

✓ Well, I prefer views in other countries apart from Vietnam because I'm a travelaholic.

The nonstandard spelling 'travelholic' should be 'travelaholic' (word formation). Also 'a travelaholic person' is redundant; 'a travelaholic' or 'I'm travelaholic' (better: 'I'm a travelaholic') is correct. Suggestion: use standard word forms and avoid redundant nouns following -holic adjectives. Grammar Problem Type ID: 13

× I want to discover many new things such as cultures, cuisines or traditional customs or landscapes.

✓ I want to discover many new things such as cultures, cuisines, traditional customs, and landscapes.

Maintain parallel structure in lists and use commas with 'and' before the final item. Avoid repeating 'or' between items; use commas and a final 'and' for a natural list. Suggestion: list items in the same grammatical form and use proper punctuation for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 16