Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, use correct grammar and tense, reduce hesitations and repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g. "when I travel" or "when I travelled") and avoid filler sounds like "uh."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember places I have visited. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes and landmarks, and then I share the best photos with my friends to show them what the trip was like.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer, use correct grammar (e.g. "I prefer rural areas"), and combine supporting points into coherent sentences using linking words like "because" or "so." Provide specific examples and avoid trailing off.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are more natural and peaceful. For instance, I enjoy views with trees, mountains and rivers, which help me relax and clear my mind after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Decide on one clear preference and state it correctly (e.g. "I prefer views in other countries"). Avoid contradictory phrases and unclear comparisons. Use specific reasons and examples, and correct sentence structure and word order.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I like experiencing new landscapes and cultures. For example, visiting a foreign mountain region offers different scenery and architecture, which makes photography more interesting and refreshing.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because whenever I traveled time, I taking more pictures, That's pictures helped to me remember my uh, visited place and uh, taking pictures I share with my friends. Uh, it is uh, taking pictures.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because whenever I travel, I take more pictures. Those pictures help me remember the places I visited, and I share the photos with my friends.

Problems: incorrect verb forms and tense consistency. 'traveled time' is ungrammatical; use 'travel' for habitual action (present simple). 'I taking' lacks auxiliary and should be 'I take'. 'That's pictures helped to me remember' has wrong demonstrative and verb form; use 'Those pictures help me remember' (present simple for general truth). 'visited place' needs 'places I visited'. 'taking pictures I share' has incorrect word order; rephrase to 'I share the photos'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, ensure verbs are conjugated (subject + base or s-form), use correct demonstratives ('those'), and place objects after verbs.

× I'm mostly preferring rural area because a rural area is traditional and a natural place. More trees, mountains, rivers, etcetera. Uh, it's make a good refresher and good mindful relaxing and I.

✓ I mostly prefer rural areas because they are traditional and natural places, with more trees, mountains, and rivers. They are good for refreshing the mind and relaxing.

Problems: incorrect verb form 'I'm mostly preferring' should be simple present 'I mostly prefer' for preferences. 'rural area' needs plural or article; use 'rural areas' or 'a rural area'. 'a rural area is traditional and a natural place' is awkward; better 'they are traditional and natural places'. 'it's make' uses wrong verb form; should be 'they are good for' or 'they make a good refresher' but 'refreshing the mind' is clearer. Suggestion: use simple present for likes/preferences, match singular/plural subjects with verbs and pronouns, and use clear noun phrases.

× As I mostly preferring a foreign country because my country is natural and a more ambience, it's make a good relaxing and refreshing my mind and more capturing like mountain, river something something else.

✓ I mostly prefer foreign countries because they have pleasant natural ambience; they are relaxing and refreshing for my mind, and have more features to photograph, like mountains and rivers.

Problems: 'As I mostly preferring' uses progressive present incorrectly; use simple present 'I mostly prefer'. 'a foreign country' vs 'foreign countries' should match meaning; plural fits general preference. 'my country is natural and a more ambience' is ungrammatical; 'have pleasant natural ambience' or 'are more natural and atmospheric'. 'it's make' wrong verb form; use 'they are' or 'they make'. 'refreshing my mind' needs 'refreshing for my mind' or 'refresh my mind'. 'more capturing like mountain, river' is unclear; use 'more to photograph, like mountains and rivers'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, use correct noun forms and prepositions, and choose clearer collocations (pleasant ambience, photograph features).