Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, grammatical, and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Avoid unclear phrases like "wheels of nature" and filler words. Use linking words (for example, however) if you add contrast.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take many photographs. However, when I encounter an especially striking natural scene, such as a colorful sunset over the sea, I often take a quick photo to remember it.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and cohesion: begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support it with specific reasons and a linking phrase. Correct subject-verb agreement and word choice (e.g., "Despite cities being praised" or "Although cities are praised"). Keep to 2–3 sentences max.

Ejemplo: Although cities are praised for their modern skyscrapers and architecture, I prefer rural views because I enjoy the peace and the sight of majestic mountains and endless meadows.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitation and vague phrasing. State your position clearly (e.g., I prefer views in other countries) then give a specific comparison and example. Use fluent linking words (for example, because, for instance) and remove fillers like "uh."

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because some places, for example Switzerland, have dramatic mountain scenery that my country lacks; their high peaks and glaciers are more impressive than the landscapes at home.

× 'I actually I'm not interested in photographing, but whenever I see stunning wheels of nature.'

✓ 'I'm actually not interested in photographing, but whenever I see stunning scenes of nature.'

'in' before actually is unnecessary and splits contraction; "wheels of nature" is incorrect collocation — use "scenes of nature" or "views of nature". Also move "actually" after I or use "I'm actually not" for natural word order. Suggestion: say "I'm actually not interested in taking photographs" or "I'm actually not interested in photographing, but whenever I see stunning scenes of nature...".'},{

× 'Despite cities are praised for its modern skyscrapers and architectural arts, I prefer use of majestic mountains and endless meadows.'

✓ 'Although cities are praised for their modern skyscrapers and architectural works, I prefer the majestic mountains and endless meadows.'

'Despite' is followed by a noun or noun phrase, not a full clause; use 'Although' for clauses. Subject-verb agreement: 'cities' (plural) requires 'their' not 'its'. 'Architectural arts' is awkward; 'architectural works' or just 'architecture' is better. 'I prefer use of' is incorrect—use 'I prefer the majestic mountains...' or 'I prefer to use'. Suggestion: 'Although cities are praised for their modern skyscrapers and architecture, I prefer the majestic mountains and endless meadows.'.

× 'Even though my country has very beautiful views of nature, it cannot cope with, uh, very stunning views, which is uh, covered by mountains like in Switzerland.'

✓ 'Even though my country has very beautiful natural scenery, it cannot compare with the very stunning mountainous views found in Switzerland.'

'cannot cope with' is incorrect collocation here — use 'cannot compare with' to express that something is less impressive. 'which is covered by mountains' is ungrammatical relative clause (mismatch with plural 'views'); use 'mountainous views' or 'views that are covered by mountains' but better: 'mountainous views found in Switzerland.' Remove filler 'uh'. Maintain present tense: 'has' and 'cannot compare with' fit. Suggestion: 'Even though my country has very beautiful natural scenery, it cannot compare with the very stunning mountainous views in Switzerland.'.