Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g. plural forms and verb phrases).

Ejemplo: No, I don't really enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I was in college a friend and I bought a DSLR and spent a lot of time photographing landscapes, so I feel I've already done a lot of that and prefer other hobbies now.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a specific reason with a linking word. Use correct tense and natural phrasing (e.g. "born and raised"). Add one concrete detail about what you like in rural views to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I was born and raised in a big city, Toronto, so I like a change of scenery. For example, I enjoy quiet fields and rivers where I can relax and notice small details like wildflowers.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, concise opinion first and support it with a specific reason and example. Remove filler words (uh) and avoid repeating the same idea. Use natural collocations like "travel to other countries" or "explore abroad."

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I've spent most of my life in my home country and want to see different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I'd like to visit Japan to see its mountains and traditional towns, which are very different from where I grew up.

× Well I do not like taking picture of different views and different port or different locations because when I was in my college days me and my friend bought a professional DSLR camera and we used to take a lot of pictures back in those days.

✓ Well, I do not like taking pictures of different views, ports, or locations because when I was in college my friend and I bought a professional DSLR camera and we used to take a lot of pictures.

Errors: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' (count noun with general meaning) and 'different port' should be plural 'ports' to match list. Word order 'me and my friend' is incorrect; use 'my friend and I' as the subject. Also remove redundant 'in my college days' to 'in college'. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally; place 'I' last in a compound subject.

× So that is why I'm not interested to take.

✓ So that is why I'm not interested in taking pictures.

Error: 'interested to take' is ungrammatical. Use the preposition 'interested in' followed by a gerund ('taking'). Also specify the object 'pictures' to clarify meaning.

× I prefer views of rural areas because I have been born and brought up in city area and even here in Yanda I'm living in a famous city which is Toronto.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas because I was born and brought up in a city area, and here in Yanda I live in a famous city, Toronto.

Errors: 'have been born' is incorrect for birth; use simple past 'was born'. 'Brought up' pairs with 'was' as 'was born and brought up'. 'I'm living' is possible but simple present 'I live' is more natural for permanent residence. Also 'in city area' needs article 'a' -> 'in a city area' or better 'in the city'.

× So that is why I do not like to see cities all the time and that is why I prefer watching.

✓ So that is why I do not like to see cities all the time, and I prefer watching rural scenery.

Errors: Sentence ends with vague verb 'watching' without an object. Provide object 'rural scenery' to complete meaning. Also avoid repeating 'that is why' twice; combine clauses for clarity.

× I do prefer the views from other countries because I have lived in my country for almost 20 to 22 years and uh, I have visited a lot of places in my country.

✓ I prefer views from other countries because I lived in my country for almost 20 to 22 years, and I have visited many places there.

Errors: Using 'do prefer' is unnecessary; simple 'prefer' is fine. 'Have lived' suggests continuing residence, but speaker refers to a past period; 'lived' (simple past) fits. 'I have visited a lot of places in my country' can stay present perfect if visits are relevant now, but 'many places there' is more concise. Also avoid filler 'uh' in formal answers.

× So that is why I would say that I like to leave or I would like to explore other countries instead of my own country.

✓ So I would say that I would like to leave my country or explore other countries instead.

Errors: 'I like to leave' mixes meanings; 'would like to leave' or 'would like to explore' fit conditional/wish contexts. Place object 'my country' after 'leave'. Use parallel structure: 'leave my country or explore other countries'.