Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words and avoid repetition (e.g. 'I only take pictures when I see...'). Also keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't consider myself a good photographer, so I only take photos of truly striking scenes. For example, I often photograph sunsets or dramatic mountain views to remember the moment. When I travel, I sometimes take a few extra shots to capture the atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetitions and fix small hesitations (remove repeated phrases like 'if I if I').

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because living in a busy city makes me crave peace. For instance, countryside scenery with fields and quiet roads helps me relax and recharge when I travel.

Sugerencia: Give a clear conditional structure: state the overall idea then explain conditions with linking words. Be specific about examples and correct small wording issues (e.g. 'it depends' and use 'countries such as Japan or Korea'). Aim for two concise supporting details.

Ejemplo: It depends on the kind of view I want. If I'm seeking mountain landscapes, I prefer visiting rural areas in my own country because they are nearby and familiar. However, if I want to experience distinctive urban architecture, I might travel to countries such as Japan or South Korea.

× I only take pictures when I saw some very stunning views like sunset or the dramatic mountain views.

✓ I only take pictures when I see very stunning views like sunsets or dramatic mountain views.

The sentence mixes present habitual action ('I only take pictures') with a past simple verb ('saw'). Use the present simple 'see' to match the habitual context. Also pluralize 'sunset' to 'sunsets' for general instances and remove the extra article before 'dramatic mountain views'. Suggestion: use consistent tense and plural where referring to general occurrences.

× Maybe I will take pictures to capture them.

✓ Maybe I will take pictures to capture them.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. It correctly uses the future modal 'will' to express a possible future action. No change is necessary. (Included to indicate no error under listed types.)

× I definitely prefer rural areas because I do live in urban cities so if I if I need to travel I definitely choose a rural area because it will make me feel more relaxed.

✓ I definitely prefer rural areas because I live in urban cities, so if I need to travel I would choose a rural area because it makes me feel more relaxed.

The original has a repeated phrase 'if I if I' and unnaturally uses 'do live' for emphasis where simple present 'live' is better. 'Definitely choose' is acceptable but 'would choose' is more natural when describing a hypothetical travel situation. Also use 'makes' (present simple) to describe a general effect. Suggest removing repetition, use simple present for habitual facts, and use conditional modals ('would') for hypothetical situations.

× Well, I would say depends.

✓ Well, I would say it depends.

The sentence omits the dummy subject 'it' needed for the impersonal construction 'it depends'. Insert 'it' to form a complete present-tense clause. Suggestion: use 'it depends' when giving a conditional or qualified answer.

× If I want to see some urban cities, maybe I will go to Japan and like Korea.

✓ If I want to see urban cityscapes, I might go to Japan or Korea.

'Urban cities' is redundant—use 'urban cityscapes' or just 'cities'. 'Maybe I will' is acceptable but 'I might' is more natural for hypothetical preference. The phrase 'and like Korea' is ungrammatical; use 'or Korea' to list alternatives. Also prefer parallel structures. Suggestion: avoid redundant words, use 'might' for possibilities, and join alternatives with 'or'.

× because it will make me feel more relaxed.

✓ because it makes me feel more relaxed.

When describing a general or habitual effect, present simple 'makes' is more natural than future 'will make'. Use present simple to state that rural areas generally have the effect of making the speaker feel relaxed. Suggest using present simple for general truths or repeated outcomes.