Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (ví dụ: 'to taking' → 'to take'; 'a pictures' → 'pictures'), rút gọn và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng theo đúng cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh lặp từ và dùng nối liên kết hợp lý (for example, because, so). Thêm thông tin cụ thể (ví dụ loại cảnh bạn thích, mục đích chụp) để tăng tính phong phú của nội dung.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially like taking photos of coastal and mountain views because they are dramatic and peaceful. For example, when I visit a beach I usually take wide shots at sunset to capture the colors, and I often share the best pictures on social media so my friends can see them.

Sugerencia: Cần cải thiện phát âm/ghép từ và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'a tall buildings' → 'tall buildings'; 'it's it's familiar with me' → 'they are familiar to me'). Tránh câu đoạn dở dang; dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, although, while). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể để giải thích lý do như ví dụ hoặc so sánh rõ ràng giữa hai loại cảnh.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views. Since I live in a city, tall buildings and busy streets are familiar, so I enjoy the calm, open landscapes of the countryside. For instance, I like wide fields and small villages because they feel relaxing, whereas urban views often seem hectic.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu (ví dụ: 'This is discovered in our country' rất không tự nhiên; 'a in strong impress' sai cú pháp). Nên nêu lí do cụ thể và dùng ví dụ rõ ràng với câu hoàn chỉnh. Dùng liên từ (for example, because, so) để làm câu mạch lạc hơn và tránh tiếng ơ, ngập ngừng.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a personal connection to the landscapes. For example, places like Halong Bay and Sung Sot Cave are uniquely beautiful, and visiting them leaves a strong impression due to their dramatic scenery and cultural significance.

× Yeah, actually I really love to taking photos with some breathtaking views.

✓ Yeah, actually I really love taking photos of breathtaking views.

Use the gerund without 'to' after verbs like 'love'. Also use 'of' rather than 'with' to describe photos showing views. Suggestion: say 'I love taking photos of breathtaking views.'

× This is because I can't save this on my phone and looking back on whatever I want to see them and maybe you know if you take a pictures you can easy to send or post on social media which helped me.

✓ This is because I cannot save all of them on my phone to look back at whenever I want, and if you take pictures you can easily send or post them on social media, which helps me.

Multiple issues: pronoun reference and object form ('save this' unclear, use 'them'/'all of them'), incorrect verb forms ('looking back' should be part of purpose 'to look back at'), article and count noun errors ('a pictures' wrong), adverb placement and form ('easy' should be 'easily'), tense/verb agreement ('helped' -> 'helps'). Suggestions: break into shorter clauses, use correct pronouns and adverbs, and keep verbs consistent.

× Actually, I prefer the views of rural areas.

✓ Actually, I prefer rural views.

Use a more natural noun phrase; 'the views of rural areas' is wordy. No pronoun error severe, but simplifying improves grammaticality and fluency.

× This is because I live in the urban areas so I see a tall buildings, skyscrapers.

✓ This is because I live in an urban area, so I see tall buildings and skyscrapers.

Do not use 'the' with 'urban areas' in this context; use singular 'an urban area' or plural without 'the'. Use plural 'buildings' without 'a'. Use 'and' to connect nouns.

× So it's it's familiar with me.

✓ So it is familiar to me.

Correct prepositional collocation is 'familiar to someone' (or 'familiar to me') rather than 'familiar with me'. Also remove duplicated 'it's'.

× However, if I go to Seoul areas, I will see the large view and I just want to watch them and.

✓ However, if I go to areas around Seoul, I will see wide open views and I just want to look at them.

Use 'areas around Seoul' or 'Seoul' not 'Seoul areas'. 'Large view' is unnatural; use 'wide open views'. Use 'look at' rather than 'watch' for scenery. Remove trailing 'and' and ensure sentence completes thought.

× I prefer the views of my own country.

✓ I prefer the views of my own country.

Sentence is acceptable; kept as is. Structure is correct for expressing preference.

× This is discovered in our country.

✓ These can be found in our country.

'This is discovered' is incorrect passive and unclear. Use 'These can be found' to refer to 'views' or 'landscapes' properly.

× There are a lot of breathtaking landscape such as Halong Bay or Sundown Cave that's really beautiful.

✓ There are a lot of breathtaking landscapes such as Halong Bay or Sung Sot Cave that are really beautiful.

Use plural 'landscapes' with 'a lot of'. Use correct name 'Sung Sot Cave' (if intended) or 'Sundown' is likely incorrect. Use 'that are' to agree with plural noun. Ensure proper nouns spelled correctly.

× And if we go there, you can have a in strong impress about this.

✓ And if we go there, you can be strongly impressed by it.

'Have a strong impression' would work, but original mixes forms. Use passive 'be impressed' or active 'have a strong impression'. Correct adverb placement: 'strongly impressed'. Remove extraneous 'in' and fix preposition to 'by'.

× So I think, uh, our landscape.

✓ So I think our landscapes are wonderful.

Original fragment lacks a verb and is incomplete. Complete the sentence with a verb and adjective to express the idea.