Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and fix verb agreement and awkward phrases. Add one specific example to make your answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember trips and share experiences with friends. For example, on my last trip to Kyoto I photographed a temple at sunrise; the light and details in those images helped me explain the atmosphere to my friends later.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly with one clear reason and avoid contradictory or irrelevant statements. Use coherent linking words and relevant vocabulary (e.g., skyline, architecture, street life). Remove irrelevant bits like "I love making friends" unless connected to views.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy city skylines and interesting architecture. For instance, I like photographing busy streets and modern bridges in my city since the contrast of lights and buildings creates dynamic images.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and add a specific reason with one concrete example. Correct small grammar issues (use singular/plural correctly) and avoid repeating "I love" too often.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer unfamiliar architecture and landscapes. For example, when I visited Barcelona I was fascinated by Gaudí’s buildings, which were completely different from anything at home and made me want to take many photos.

× I love taking pictures whenever I travel because it helps me remember what happened and how the places are.

✓ I love taking pictures whenever I travel because they help me remember what happened and what the places were like.

Pronoun reference and verb agreement: 'pictures' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' rather than 'it', and 'how the places are' is awkward after past reference 'remember what happened'. Use 'what the places were like' to match memory of past impressions and correct agreement.

× I love taking pictures because I usually shows my friends things that happened, how the places are, and everything that went on that place.

✓ I love taking pictures because I usually show my friends things that happened, what the places were like, and everything that went on in those places.

Subject-verb agreement: the subject 'I' requires the base verb 'show', not 'shows'. Also adjust noun phrases and preposition: use 'what the places were like' and 'in those places' for natural English and correct reference.

× I prefer views in urban areas because I love seeing beaches, flyovers, cars, expensive cars and all those things are mostly found in urban areas, not rural area.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I love seeing beaches, flyovers, cars, expensive cars and those things are mostly found in urban areas, not rural areas.

Article and number consistency: 'all those things are mostly found' is wordy; 'those things' suffices. Also 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match 'urban areas' and general meaning.

× And I love the fresh air.

✓ However, I also love the fresh air.

Contrast needed: The original sentence begins with 'And' after discussing urban features; to express contrast with urban preference while liking fresh air (a rural trait), use 'However, I also...' to clarify sentence relation and improve sentence cohesion.

× I love making friends.

✓ I also enjoy making friends.

Style and register: 'I love making friends' is grammatical but short and abrupt after previous sentences. 'I also enjoy making friends' fits fluency and connects with prior sentence; no grammatical error but improved coherence.

× Absolutely. I prefer views in another country because I love seeing things that I haven't seen before.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer views in another country because I love seeing things I haven't seen before.

Minor stylistic cleanup: Removing 'that' is optional but makes the sentence more natural; no major grammar error. Fits tense: present perfect 'haven't seen' is correct for prior experience.

× I love to see new things, new buildings, new towers, new bridges, so I prefer another countries.

✓ I love to see new things, new buildings, new towers and new bridges, so I prefer other countries.

Count noun and determiner error: 'another countries' is incorrect because 'another' is singular; use 'other countries' for plural. Also remove redundant commas for smoother listing.