Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and remove filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and one brief example. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach to remember family trips.

Sugerencia: Open with a direct statement, then provide a specific reason and one concrete detail. Use a linking word (because, so) to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same phrase.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they have more greenery and peaceful landscapes. For instance, I like photographing rolling hills and small farms when I visit the countryside.

Sugerencia: Make your statement grammatically correct and give a clearer reason with a specific example. Start with a direct sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words (because, for example). Omit unnecessary closing words like 'thank you'.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse landscapes and many places I haven't explored yet. For example, I plan to photograph the mountain lakes and historic towns here before travelling abroad.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views as I'm fascinated towards, uh, keeping the memories for future.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I'm fascinated by keeping memories for the future.

The preposition 'towards' is incorrect with 'fascinated' and 'keeping the memories' needs 'by' and article 'the' before 'future'. Use 'because' to show reason. Suggestion: use 'fascinated by' for what interests you and 'for the future' for purpose.

× So yes, I of course do like taking pictures.

✓ So yes, I do like taking pictures, of course.

The adverb 'of course' is awkwardly placed. Reordering improves naturalness: place 'of course' at the end or after auxiliary 'do'. Suggestion: 'I do like... of course' or 'Of course, I like...'.

× As I live in urban areas, I love to go to rural areas and take pictures of that area because I think that is more fascinating and there is more greenery than in urban areas.

✓ As I live in an urban area, I love going to rural areas and taking pictures there because I think they are more fascinating and have more greenery than urban areas.

Use singular or articles consistently: 'an urban area' or 'urban areas'. Also use parallel gerunds 'going' and 'taking'. Replace 'that area' with 'there' or 'they' to refer to rural areas. 'There is more greenery' should match plural 'they have more greenery' or use 'there is more greenery in rural areas'. Suggestion: keep number agreement and parallel structure.

× So yes, I love going to rural areas more than urban areas.

✓ So yes, I prefer going to rural areas rather than urban areas.

The original is understandable but 'prefer... more than' is redundant. Use 'prefer... rather than' for clearer comparison. Also 'going to rural areas more than urban areas' lacks parallelism; use 'prefer going to rural areas rather than to urban areas' if needed.

× As my country have different geographical reasons, I love my country more than visiting another country.

✓ As my country has different geographical features, I prefer my country to visiting another country.

'Country' is singular so verb should be 'has' not 'have'. 'Geographical reasons' is odd; use 'geographical features' or 'geography'. Also 'love my country more than visiting another country' is unbalanced; 'prefer my country to visiting another country' or 'prefer to visit my country rather than another country' is better. Suggestion: correct subject-verb agreement and choose appropriate nouns and comparative structure.

× There are still many places to go around in my own country.

✓ There are still many places to visit in my own country.

'Places to go around' is unnatural; use 'places to visit'. Tense is present and appropriate; just replace phrase for natural collocation. Suggestion: use common verb-noun collocations like 'places to visit'.

× So I think for now I will choose my country to visit.

✓ So I think for now I will choose to visit my country.

Word order is awkward. Place infinitive 'to visit' before object 'my country' for natural English. Tense 'will choose' is acceptable for future intention. Suggestion: 'I will choose to visit my country' or 'I will choose my country to visit' reorders to standard pattern but preferred is first.

× Thank you.

✓ Thank you.

No grammatical error; polite closing is fine. Included here for completeness.